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“Mikey…should I start with her hands or with her feet?” Zooey quizzically stared upon the dead corpse. Mikey stared among side her.
“Does it really matter? I’m telling you, we shouldn’t have chop her up, it only makes the job messier!” He complained, “We can’t we just bury her?”
She sighed impatiently.
“Fine! But I want to cut her head off first…”
“NO…. you’re going to slit her throat and then we are going to bury her and then… we are going… to LEAVE!” He said pissed off.
“Fine….” She grumbled and grabbed the gruesome axe in reach and positioned to herself to properly decapitate the corpse of Helena. She stared at the body with burning hatred, and with a heavy swing she brought the axe down and sliced the blade straight threw her neck bones with a messy splatter of blood.

“AH!” Mikey let out a sudden shriek of surprise as still red warm blood ended up splattering him on his face and glasses.
“Oops.” Zooey gave him an innocent smile, “hey, where’d you get that apron?” She had not noticed that he had been wearing a skeleton kitchen apron, now fashionably drenched in blood, on top of his black clothes.

“Oh, I found it in Frank’s suitcase while he was knocked out. And you ruined it!” he looked down upon the fresh blood, soon to be stained on the white skeleton design.

“You looked through his suitcase?” Zooey was about to crack up laughing, “I should chop your head off, too!”

“What do I do? I can’t just shove it back in his suitcase like this.”

“Yes, you can.”

“But he’ll notice! Sooner or later.”

“So what? Deny it! I bet he hasn’t even realized you took it.” She reassured him. He wiped the blood of his face with disgust and cleaned his glasses the best he could.

They dug a deep hole in the small cave of roots at the base of the tree and dragged the corpse and separated head and dropped them inside.

“Hey, just like Sleepy Hollow.” Zooey commented. Mikey just grunted.

After burying the body they simply walked away; without a care in the world and with a hell of lot of evidence left behind, but neither if them cared. No one would find her and if they did no one would care. Being accused of murder was the last thing they had in mind.




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