For once, I have actually managed to come up with a song about something somewhat political that actually makes sense.
Roasting at the stake
Build your bridges
Open wide awake
Release your grudges
It's time to put an end to this.
Burning for the state
The state that Goodman rides
It's just a local law
A local law you must abide
Hunger leading starvation
Humanity's elimination
Do you think he would care?
His ass is counting green
Roasting at the stake
Build your bridges
Open wide awake
Release your grudges
It's time to put an end to this.
Alien pass by the millions;
millions ready to strive
Striving exactly for what now?
American drinking up his life.
Goodman comes, good men go
Civilization's dying through a system
To think that we're better off
Seems to bring my spirits with them...
Goodman is the mayor of Nevada by the way. He's made it a law where if you're homeless and out on the streets, you'll be sent to jail. It's kind of his fault for so many homeless people being out there in the first place, and that's his solution to the problem. I'd like some good comments on this, meaning I can actually improve the song through what you say.
Thanks for wasting time with me.
Build your bridges
Open wide awake
Release your grudges
It's time to put an end to this.
Burning for the state
The state that Goodman rides
It's just a local law
A local law you must abide
Hunger leading starvation
Humanity's elimination
Do you think he would care?
His ass is counting green
Roasting at the stake
Build your bridges
Open wide awake
Release your grudges
It's time to put an end to this.
Alien pass by the millions;
millions ready to strive
Striving exactly for what now?
American drinking up his life.
Goodman comes, good men go
Civilization's dying through a system
To think that we're better off
Seems to bring my spirits with them...
Goodman is the mayor of Nevada by the way. He's made it a law where if you're homeless and out on the streets, you'll be sent to jail. It's kind of his fault for so many homeless people being out there in the first place, and that's his solution to the problem. I'd like some good comments on this, meaning I can actually improve the song through what you say.
Thanks for wasting time with me.
It's really good. I don't have anything to comment on as I'm not good at the whole political pissed off kind of writing.
But I really like this.
So yeah
^^,
Nice job
Donna H., October 23rd, 2007 at 05:56:01am
Cool.
Macarena, August 8th, 2007 at 06:05:44am
Wow.
Thats really really good.
Jessika with a K, July 5th, 2007 at 11:53:47pm
sweet action dude that song rocks.
you should send it to Billie Joe or something.
hah.
AnaSanders, July 5th, 2007 at 06:26:42pm
its really good:)
My Chemical Emotions, July 4th, 2007 at 04:48:18am