Coming From the Lowest Part of Me
Warning- probably the most disturbing thing I've ever written, even for me just to see it all spill out on paper. So be prepared.
Hey, hey,
last time I saw you I forgot to say
what was on my mind.
But now that I get this once chance
to clear things up,
it's not so easy to say.
I like the way you move
and if I had to choose
between the things you say and the way you move,
you'd better be speechless by tonight.
I'll leave you to die,
but you'll so pretty with your
bleeding skin reflecting the moonlight
that I'll have to have a taste
before I throw you away.
I hope you know that you mean
absolutely nothing to me.
But I wouldn't want you gone
because you sure do incite the guilty worst out of me.
But, oh God, I want you to be my dog on a leash
because you give me these animal urges
and we should finish this like proper beasts.
I said, oh baby, I love it when you touch me like that.
And when you didn't reply,
I almost forced your head so you'd
do it over and over again.
So with an, oh fuck, I'd like to
Finish you once and for all.
And when the night gets cold,
you'd finish me and away you'd crawl.
So I'd tell you that this is coming from the lowest part of me,
But I doubt that even you would still fuck for free.
Hey, hey,
last time I saw you I forgot to say
what was on my mind.
But now that I get this once chance
to clear things up,
it's not so easy to say.
I like the way you move
and if I had to choose
between the things you say and the way you move,
you'd better be speechless by tonight.
I'll leave you to die,
but you'll so pretty with your
bleeding skin reflecting the moonlight
that I'll have to have a taste
before I throw you away.
I hope you know that you mean
absolutely nothing to me.
But I wouldn't want you gone
because you sure do incite the guilty worst out of me.
But, oh God, I want you to be my dog on a leash
because you give me these animal urges
and we should finish this like proper beasts.
I said, oh baby, I love it when you touch me like that.
And when you didn't reply,
I almost forced your head so you'd
do it over and over again.
So with an, oh fuck, I'd like to
Finish you once and for all.
And when the night gets cold,
you'd finish me and away you'd crawl.
So I'd tell you that this is coming from the lowest part of me,
But I doubt that even you would still fuck for free.
HOLY SH*T!
FaLlEn _ AnGeL, December 19th, 2007 at 03:39:05am
Thanks =D
I'm not usually that... violent, by the way xD
Miley Cyrus, December 15th, 2007 at 05:15:59pm
That reminds me a lot of the book I'm reading, Kiss the Girls by James Patterson. It's about a man who kidnaps women and has sex with them and keeps them in his house using rules like, "Do not try to escape" and "Don't try to fight me." If a woman breaks a rule, then he leaves them tied to a tree in the middle of the wilderness to die.
I liked what you wrote a lot =]
lishaaaaa, December 15th, 2007 at 02:57:05pm
I didn't find it all that disturbing. I think it's terrific. I wish I could write as half as well as you do. =)
The Kill, December 15th, 2007 at 07:09:49am
O_O
That was...different.
MikeIsMine!!!, December 15th, 2007 at 06:04:20am