Poetic Love
Love
If I light up a candle the fire is warm, warm like you.
If I feel the heat of the candle, I feel you.
You're giving me warmth, strength and a light in the dark.
So light up a candle and show me the right path.
If I pick up a flower, beautiful like you,
I never want to let go.
I put it into water, keeping it safe,
giving it all my warmth, all my love,
like I will give you.
If I look at the sun, shining bright like your eyes,
I drown in its depth and grace.
I see a shining in your eyes that never can be replaced.
You make me feel complete in so many ways.
If I see a butterfly, it reminds me of your love.
And the feeling you give me deep inside.
I'm watching the butterfly fly high above,
Reaching the sky, flying over to your house.
So let me be your butterfly,
reaching the sky,
flying to you,
never letting go.
Let me be your candle,
lighting you the way through the dark
and I want to be your flower
giving you all my heart.
If I can be your sun,
I will shine just for you.
Till the end of time,
never letting go
cause I love you so.
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I'd love to get some feedback on this.
I wrote this poem a while back for an ex ex ex ex boyfriend of mine. We're not together anymore, but we're still friends. I've had boyfriends after him, but still this is special to me. Back then I was madly in love with him, as you may have noticed while reading the poem. I wanted to give it to him as a birthday present, but unfortunately some things have happened that made me not do it. Yet the poem remains and the memory of the good times we shared will never fade away.
If I light up a candle the fire is warm, warm like you.
If I feel the heat of the candle, I feel you.
You're giving me warmth, strength and a light in the dark.
So light up a candle and show me the right path.
If I pick up a flower, beautiful like you,
I never want to let go.
I put it into water, keeping it safe,
giving it all my warmth, all my love,
like I will give you.
If I look at the sun, shining bright like your eyes,
I drown in its depth and grace.
I see a shining in your eyes that never can be replaced.
You make me feel complete in so many ways.
If I see a butterfly, it reminds me of your love.
And the feeling you give me deep inside.
I'm watching the butterfly fly high above,
Reaching the sky, flying over to your house.
So let me be your butterfly,
reaching the sky,
flying to you,
never letting go.
Let me be your candle,
lighting you the way through the dark
and I want to be your flower
giving you all my heart.
If I can be your sun,
I will shine just for you.
Till the end of time,
never letting go
cause I love you so.
****
I'd love to get some feedback on this.
I wrote this poem a while back for an ex ex ex ex boyfriend of mine. We're not together anymore, but we're still friends. I've had boyfriends after him, but still this is special to me. Back then I was madly in love with him, as you may have noticed while reading the poem. I wanted to give it to him as a birthday present, but unfortunately some things have happened that made me not do it. Yet the poem remains and the memory of the good times we shared will never fade away.
Great poem. I love the choice of words, it's perfect.
threeam., June 3rd, 2008 at 12:42:17am
Whoah. Thats awesome
Fall-Out-Girl, June 2nd, 2008 at 12:12:16pm
Aw! I think it's very sweet.
:)
Skippy., June 2nd, 2008 at 08:26:48am