Liar
So here's a song/poem thing I wrote out of the thoughts of my messed up mind, but I'lll keep the story behind it to myself.
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You promised not to lie and I did exactly the same,
It's all someone's fault and there's no one to blame
There's so many lies,
I live to die,
You're nothing I want to live for
I bang my head on the walls of this padded room
Waiting for a fire to burn down my dreams
You laugh,
I cry,
They all wish I'd die,
Putting me down is all you've ever done
My hands on my ears,
I brings my to tears,
To know you never cared
If you follow through,
I'll do the same as you,
I never told you I would listen.
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eh?
_______________
You promised not to lie and I did exactly the same,
It's all someone's fault and there's no one to blame
There's so many lies,
I live to die,
You're nothing I want to live for
I bang my head on the walls of this padded room
Waiting for a fire to burn down my dreams
You laugh,
I cry,
They all wish I'd die,
Putting me down is all you've ever done
My hands on my ears,
I brings my to tears,
To know you never cared
If you follow through,
I'll do the same as you,
I never told you I would listen.
___________________
eh?
Thats Awesome!!! i no how u feel... i feel like that all the time!!!!!
Neurotic2theBone, March 30th, 2009 at 01:46:30am
This is so awesome!
In My Insanity, November 10th, 2008 at 03:14:44pm
i wish i had the time write stuff on paper and and whine about all the gay stuff that sucks cheese. i've tried to write poems and things but i can't :molly: well i can, but you know it ends up all emo.
BTW THIS IS AWESOME.
icegirl., November 10th, 2008 at 12:08:26am
I fuc*ing agree with ST. Mikey. U R the f*cking best
Freak-a-zoid, November 9th, 2008 at 08:35:06pm
aw thank you!
Spider Billie, November 9th, 2008 at 07:47:46pm
OmfG! You are the best f*cking poet I've ever met.
You give Dr. Seuss a run for his money!
Teh emotion behind that is one of the best things about that.
You're lucky, in a way. I can usually only write poems or songs when I'm angry, even though most of the world's greatest poems and songs are a product of depression or sadness or some other form of emotion. All I have to work with is anger, or self-righteousness, or something else along those lines.
But really, well done!
PCG, November 9th, 2008 at 07:29:16pm