Writing Lyrics

I've recently started writing lyrics, so I thought a thread where you guys could post your lyrics, and comment on them would be helpful for everyone.

So, if you want feedback on lyrics you've written, post away!

I write lyrics all the time. I tend not too post them though.

Well, this thread is a roaring success.
NOT.

ROAR!. No. But ive got an urge too lock it. But... Its not a duplicate.

ok here goes some of mine.,


To Be abel to die
You need to have lived,
To be abel to live,
You need to be loved,

Walking down a litter full street,
I havent had time to live,
Or be loved.

Loneliness. all alone,
by myself and Im ready to go,
My Soul cant depart,
where ever its ment to be.

Walking down this litter full street
I havent had time to live
Or be loved

To Convers,
You need to,
To be to you need love,
Love leads to life,
life to death.

So take my soul
Burry me deep
Let me live
Fill my hear
Give me back my life!

(life love dead)
(life love death)

and the next one.

Dont hit kids, seriously
Now they carry guns,
Sit on your couch
Watching spirit crushing daytime telly.
A emaresment to the
Fucked up brats you spawend
Blaiming you for there shit
But how can we blaim you?
We know right from wrong dont we?

Yeah, thanx heaps. You can lock it if you want. I guess no one is interested.

Sammie:

ok here goes some of mine.,


To Be abel to die
You need to have lived,
To be abel to live,
You need to be loved,

Walking down a litter full street,
I havent had time to live,
Or be loved.

Loneliness. all alone,
by myself and Im ready to go,
My Soul cant depart,
where ever its ment to be.

Walking down this litter full street
I havent had time to live
Or be loved

To Convers,
You need to,
To be to you need love,
Love leads to life,
life to death.

So take my soul
Burry me deep
Let me live
Fill my hear
Give me back my life!

(life love dead)
(life love death)

and the next one.

Dont hit kids, seriously
Now they carry guns,
Sit on your couch
Watching spirit crushing daytime telly.
A emaresment to the
Fucked up brats you spawend
Blaiming you for there shit
But how can we blaim you?
We know right from wrong dont we?

I take it back. I LIKE!

thanks that means a lot to me this is another one me and a friend wrote

The sun sets on another waste of time,
No one cares,
No one loves,
No one gives a shit.

The coffee shop on my own, commit a crim
Death, rape, destruction
Death, rape, destruction

Walking a fine line like an acrobat,
Waitig for it to snap,
Playing dirty, On my own I'm sat
Death, rape, deatruction,
Death, rape, deatructuin,

People passing
Day by day,
No one stops...

strolling through an alley
with a predator on her back.
pulled into a corner,
now he's got his prey-
ATTACK!
his dick rubs through her pussy
as she screams in agony.
trading her a baby for her own virginity.

cuz he wants,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

her rapist cracks a smile,
he's satisfied his taste for cum.
his victim chokes her newborn,
the only way to get it done.
his sperm swam to her ovaries,
planting her big mistake.
while an outlaw on abortion
makes it die in brutal pain.

cuz he got,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

now she's got,
death and muder.
on her mind of guilty conscience.
the homocide of a helpless infant.
never hada home outside her woom!
a tortured mother ends in babies doom!!!

Thats real pleasant

i thought so

haha, it's not suppossed to be...

Here's mine, its not very good, its my first

________________________

WORTHLESS.

There must be something wrong with me
Something I can't, but others see
I mean nothing to you
I might as well die

Do everything I can for you
Try so hard to make you proud
You look right through me
You don't hear me screaming your name out
So loud

I mean nothing
This invisible existence
Nothing I do
Will ever make it through
Not to you

Not ever


Why can't you see
Without feeling, without emotion
When your just as empty inside as me
Need to get out
Tearing at myself from the inside
Pieces of my worthless soul
Falling to the ground

I mean nothing
This invisible existence
Nothing I do
Will ever make it through
Not to you

Not ever

What can I do
To make you care
What can I do
To make you realise I am here?

__________________________

I like yours... its good

xAnarchy4theUSAx:

strolling through an alley
with a predator on her back.
pulled into a corner,
now he's got his prey-
ATTACK!
his dick rubs through her pussy
as she screams in agony.
trading her a baby for her own virginity.

cuz he wants,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

her rapist cracks a smile,
he's satisfied his taste for cum.
his victim chokes her newborn,
the only way to get it done.
his sperm swam to her ovaries,
planting her big mistake.
while an outlaw on abortion
makes it die in brutal pain.

cuz he got,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

now she's got,
death and muder.
on her mind of guilty conscience.
the homocide of a helpless infant.
never hada home outside her woom!
a tortured mother ends in babies doom!!!

Lmfao. That unpleasant. But who wants pleasant. It owns really.

I think my thread is officially dead...

What.The.Fuck? Just because no one posts in it for 2 seconds that doesnt mean its dead. Try not breathing for 2 seconds. You wont die.

You sure? You never know, with me...
You don't have to be rude just because I am impatient.
Its called a short attention span for a reason...

Gustavatron.:

xAnarchy4theUSAx:

strolling through an alley
with a predator on her back.
pulled into a corner,
now he's got his prey-
ATTACK!
his dick rubs through her pussy
as she screams in agony.
trading her a baby for her own virginity.

cuz he wants,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

her rapist cracks a smile,
he's satisfied his taste for cum.
his victim chokes her newborn,
the only way to get it done.
his sperm swam to her ovaries,
planting her big mistake.
while an outlaw on abortion
makes it die in brutal pain.

cuz he got,
penatration,
in her hole for menstration.
a substitute for mastubation.
searching for a home to house his dick!
a hit and run with her innocence!

now she's got,
death and muder.
on her mind of guilty conscience.
the homocide of a helpless infant.
never hada home outside her woom!
a tortured mother ends in babies doom!!!

Lmfao. That unpleasant. But who wants pleasant. It owns really.

why thank you

here's another one:

Your hero holds the knife
held adjacent to your throat.
without fingerprints to match,
or evidence to find,
he'll slit the throats of a generation
without being imprisoned or confined.

god is the mainstream serial killer,
complete with a transparent disguise.
god is the unconvicted felon,
who's biography teaches a lie.
god is the virgin rapist,
performing unconsectual sex on your mind.
the one thought to control your fate,
will answer all your prayers with hate.

your savior hold the gun
aimed directly at your heart.
without suspision to his name,
or a guilty conscience of his mind.
he'll spread your brains like butter
throughout the homeland of your kind.

god is the mainstream serial killer,
complete with a transparent disguise.
god is the unconvicted felon,
who's biography teaches a lie.
god is the virgin rapist,
performing unconsectual sex on your mind.
the one thought to control your fate,
will answer all your prayers with hate.

summarize your life
and mail it with a prayer,
he'll take your life,
and leave the rest,
with blankness and despair. x2
he'll answer your prayers with hate.

god is the mainstream serial killer,
complete with a transparent disguise.
god is the unconvicted felon,
who's biography teaches a lie.
god is the virgin rapist,
performing unconsectual sex on your mind.
the one thought to control your fate,
will answer all your prayers with hate.

so deposit your faith
in the one with the noose.
accept his drug,
and injest his lies,
and see how much of a god he is
when he gouges out your eyes.

he'll answer your prayers with hate.