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Posts: 748 | March 12th, 2006 at 08:46am heres the link to my story ive tryed postin it on gsb but hasnt come yet i want to knoe wat u think of it--like if it sucks or if it rocks tell everything
http://www.piczo.com/-punk-rock-addict-?g=17478908&cr=2
im not done yet |
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Posts: 66 | March 13th, 2006 at 10:32pm It's good. Though it would read easier without the grammatical errors. I also noticed a change in a character's last name in the midle of the story, " Emma Bradley" I gulped!"-direct quote from your story. Her last name was Pritchard in the begining. Other than that your story is really, really good. Keep it going. |
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Posts: 178 | March 14th, 2006 at 10:38pm Yeah, this is really good.  Well done. pm me when it's posted here on GSB. |
