Book of Life

Board index - Your poetry

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It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 15th, 2006 at 10:50pm Book of Life Jotting down these words In this book I know as life You fill the empty pages Until there is nothing left to write The story comes together It's coming page by page I'll soon leave one another With the coming of my age Standing in the hallway Watching other kids go by As they walk on to their classes Waiting until the end of time When I walk on down that pathway To the man upon the stage I'm handed my diploma And I write and turn the page One thing after another It must all come to a end You close the book for now Until you open it again With the end of this beginning This last chapter unfolds I leave this one large story Let our legacy be told. I just wrote this. I hope you enjoy it. Constructive criticism is wanted and welcome.
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	March 15th, 2006 at 11:00pm awww! I love it! You're a good writer! -favs forever!-
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 15th, 2006 at 11:01pm Thank you munchkin!
*ashlovesGDpunkrock* Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 80	March 15th, 2006 at 11:04pm wow thats really good
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 15th, 2006 at 11:06pm ashlovesGDpunkrock*: wow thats really good Thanks doll!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	March 16th, 2006 at 08:22am I actually really liked that.
PullingTheTriggerAllWrong Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 239	March 16th, 2006 at 09:04am I really like it. It's really good.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	March 16th, 2006 at 01:17pm Inari: I actually really liked that. Me too.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	March 16th, 2006 at 01:19pm snowcherry: Inari: I actually really liked that. Me too. Awesome
neen bean Addict Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 10733	March 16th, 2006 at 01:23pm it's really good
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	March 16th, 2006 at 04:37pm }Syny{: I really like it. It's really good.
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 16th, 2006 at 04:48pm Thank you all so very much! Lisalovesyou. <33
Woodrow Derenberger Moderator Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 63354	March 16th, 2006 at 05:04pm your a wonderful writer babe! I <3 it. Tori says yo, i'm on the phone with her
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 16th, 2006 at 05:15pm Fuck_America: your a wonderful writer babe! I <3 it. Tori says yo, i'm on the phone with her Thank you my sweet Mareh! Tell Tori I say hi!!
Woodrow Derenberger Moderator Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 63354	March 16th, 2006 at 05:17pm Lisa. <3: Fuck_America: your a wonderful writer babe! I <3 it. Tori says yo, i'm on the phone with her Thank you my sweet Mareh! Tell Tori I say hi!! Were not on the phone anymore Will you pm me lovemuffin?
Ruby Soho Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 465	March 16th, 2006 at 05:25pm }Syny{: I really like it. It's really good.
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	March 16th, 2006 at 05:27pm Thanks!
marie9293 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 32	August 25th, 2006 at 09:57pm I really liked it! One of the best I have read so far!
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	August 26th, 2006 at 07:29am Didn't like this stanza One thing after another It must all come to a end You close the book for now Until you open it again The rest was pretty good.

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