The Last Song

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davey jones.
Falling In Love With The Board
davey jones.
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Mibba Blog
April 12th, 2006 at 09:22pm
Yes...it's meh new story.

Go ahead, read.

You might already be reading it though....it's short, but sweet. More'll be on the way soon. Wink
greendayfrv0
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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April 14th, 2006 at 11:44pm
u need 2 make it longer but 4 a start it was ok
SmellOfRegret93
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SmellOfRegret93
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 127
April 23rd, 2006 at 01:21pm
I just read the four chapters you have so far. You're a great writer, and you and the story have a lot of potential. There's not many stories on GSB worth reading anymore, but I'll definetely keep up with yours. I look forward to reading more of your story.

Keep writing sweetheart!
skittelzster
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skittelzster
Age: 29
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Posts: 266
April 24th, 2006 at 02:44pm
Not a bad story I likes it! he he ! AND its "ohh soo very dirty!..." :p
TresFine
King For A Couple Of Days
TresFine
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April 24th, 2006 at 03:30pm
sure whats it about
davey jones.
Falling In Love With The Board
davey jones.
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Gender: Female
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Mibba Blog
April 26th, 2006 at 05:44pm
heartgrenade:
There's not many stories on GSB worth reading anymore.



Yeah. Most stories I try to read have no plot. And has everyone forgotten about constructive CRITICISM? People rate 10s when it's not worth a ten. Confused
davey jones.
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davey jones.
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Gender: Female
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Mibba Blog
April 26th, 2006 at 05:46pm
greendayfrv0:
u need 2 make it longer but 4 a start it was ok


There's 4 parts now. Much longer than the first.
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