Billies Lost Son
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Posts: 148 | April 29th, 2006 at 01:48am Loving You:
I don't know what to do,
Fighting with myself if i'm in love with you.
I'm dazed, confused, and eager for more.
But still uncertain, i can't be sure.
One part of me says yes, One part of me's scared.
What the future holds, is what i want to unfold.
Do you love me back? Or am i just playing the fool.
Drowned in my own thoughts, My minds using me as a tool.
I love everything about you, I want to know more.
Just to be near you, is a taunt and lure.
I want to be the one, who catches you when you fall.
My heart dosn't know which direction to follow at all.
Taking a chance, is taking a risk.
For you i'm prepared to gain what i've missed.
Even if it means, loosing everything i've wanted,
Even if it means, leaving broken hearted.
Being around you makes me light up with joy,
It takes me into a deep thought of your loving soul.
What could i do, tell me the way.
But it is a risk i shall take, just to see you every day. |
Milk
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  | April 29th, 2006 at 01:50am I like it. |
Babi Kid Rachy
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Posts: 4512 | April 29th, 2006 at 04:18am That is great.  |
newagecarny
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| April 29th, 2006 at 06:12am Saint of Denial:I like it. |
Billies Lost Son
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Posts: 148 | April 30th, 2006 at 09:02am Aw, thankyou, guys.
I wrote it at 2am in the morning when i couldn't stop thinking about a girl from school  It's meerly about my confusion towards her; and if i love her, or just love her dearly as a friend. |
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Posts: 2844 | April 30th, 2006 at 04:11pm i like it!!! |
Billies Lost Son
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Posts: 148 | Wow, not one negative comment yet.
Thankyou, all your positive comments make me feel really good. |
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Posts: 78 | June 10th, 2006 at 08:39am awww i heart it. =] |
Meski
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| June 10th, 2006 at 08:41am It's a very nice poem! |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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| June 10th, 2006 at 11:10am It's good. =] |
Dehren McGhengland
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Posts: 49206 | June 10th, 2006 at 11:11am It's ok. |
CrazyEyes
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Posts: 112 | June 10th, 2006 at 07:15pm Wow, I really like it. |
newagecarny
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| June 10th, 2006 at 07:32pm InNoSence:awww i heart it. =]
Why revive this?  |
rolypoly_punk
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Posts: 627 | June 11th, 2006 at 07:34pm GREAT JOB! i've felt that way many times...  |
Warning_iNSOMNIACiDIOT
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Posts: 130 | June 12th, 2006 at 12:20am dude! you just described how i feel about this guy i like. it`s weird. i can`t help but like him, and although i`ve told him, we`ll only be friends. but i still want him to like me, even though he might like someone else. and i`m also preparing to give anything to have him like me, even if i look like a fool. wow! that`s awesome. this poem rocks. |
