H (Heroine)....Whatdafunk (Daufuskie Renamed)

This song is about heroine

It’s funny when the only thing that’s keeping you sane
Is a mother fucking needle in a mother fucking vane
Where every single message being sent to your brain
Is a message of hope and a beacon of pain

Well I don’t wanna be there when you crack
Strung out on the streets getting heart attacks
You realize the city is lonely
You find yourself screaming “Somebody hold me”

It’s maniacal to think of the thoughts in your head
How you stay up every damn night wishing you were dead
The needle enters your skin and you hardly even bled
You hang on every single word that the people have said

Well I don’t wanna be there when you crack
Strung out on the streets getting heart attacks
You realize the city is lonely
You find yourself screaming “Somebody hold me”


Well I don’t wanna be there when you crack
Strung out on the streets getting heart attacks
You realize the city is lonely
You find yourself screaming “Somebody hold me”

I'm guessing by these lyrics......

...YOU have NO EXPERIENCE....of Mr Brownstone?????

S.

Load it up,
Tap the bubbles;
Find the Vein,
No more troubles!

Now that's what goes through an addicts head....

I never like rhyming, sorry.

it's spelled "heroin". "heroine" is a hero that's a girl.

I shall reiterate what I said about another poem.......this applies to YOU too

To write WELL.....you must write what you KNOW....

......clearly, you know NOTHING of this subject

so avoid it.......

S.

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

That was pretty good.

Inari:

That was pretty good.

thanks, and to the other people, i don't mind if you don't like my song, just don't say i have no idea what i'm talking about. cause i do.

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

i accept the apology, let's move on lol.

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

i accept the apology, let's move on lol.

I will say this....it gives no real insight...

it's the stuff everyone knows.....needles and all that shit...BEFORE the drug takes effect....BEFORE addiction starts

THAT is what led me to believe......you have no personal experience here

S.

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

i accept the apology, let's move on lol.

I will say this....it gives no real insight...

it's the stuff everyone knows.....needles and all that shit...BEFORE the drug takes effect....BEFORE addiction starts

THAT is what led me to believe......you have no personal experience here

S.

i would write about what actually went through my head, it's not fun to think about ya know?

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

i accept the apology, let's move on lol.

I will say this....it gives no real insight...

it's the stuff everyone knows.....needles and all that shit...BEFORE the drug takes effect....BEFORE addiction starts

THAT is what led me to believe......you have no personal experience here

S.

i would write about what actually went through my head, it's not fun to think about ya know?

It takes a hell of a lot of suffering to make a recording worth listening to......all is not sunshine and lavender tea......some things and feelings are DARK with a capital D...and no amount of little mary sunshine will bring it around to normal.....

what the fuck is normal anyway? wHAT SOCIETY DICTATES??? WE are all in a pile of shit, then.....Thanks to the GREAT government currently in power.

To write with feeling and emotion, it actually helps to have both and a bit of talent thrown in for good measure......

To take a PAINFUL situation and write about it takes GUTS, and a few synapses running around loose........and amuck.......

To have what it takes and want to make it perfect despite all the moaning, bitching, and NEGATIVITY.....you hear me? Is a Bitch and a half...........

but hey......if you want to take the easy route....go for it

S.

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

rage;love;clark:

wow, you guys are losers, how do you know if i have no experience in this. i'm SO sorry i spelled it wrong. you guys need to chill out. it is a real experience that i have had

Apologies....

For the record...wasn't just the spelling that threw me...

S.

i accept the apology, let's move on lol.

I will say this....it gives no real insight...

it's the stuff everyone knows.....needles and all that shit...BEFORE the drug takes effect....BEFORE addiction starts

THAT is what led me to believe......you have no personal experience here

S.

i would write about what actually went through my head, it's not fun to think about ya know?

It takes a hell of a lot of suffering to make a recording worth listening to......all is not sunshine and lavender tea......some things and feelings are DARK with a capital D...and no amount of little mary sunshine will bring it around to normal.....

what the fuck is normal anyway? wHAT SOCIETY DICTATES??? WE are all in a pile of shit, then.....Thanks to the GREAT government currently in power.

To write with feeling and emotion, it actually helps to have both and a bit of talent thrown in for good measure......

To take a PAINFUL situation and write about it takes GUTS, and a few synapses running around loose........and amuck.......

To have what it takes and want to make it perfect despite all the moaning, bitching, and NEGATIVITY.....you hear me? Is a Bitch and a half...........

but hey......if you want to take the easy route....go for it

S.

wow you are a loser...i'm sorry my song wasn't Dark with a capital D enough for you. i think songs should be fun. this is about as deep as i wish to go with my songs, the deepest thoughts are mine you fucking moron.

IGNORED and REPORTED

S.

Hippy-Faggot-Punk-Rocker:

IGNORED and REPORTED

S.

OH NOES! NOT REPORTED TO THE GSB.NET ADMINS! WHATEVER SHALL I DO?

rage;love;clark:

OH NOES! NOT REPORTED TO THE GSB.NET ADMINS! WHATEVER SHALL I DO?

K you can shut up now.
Show some damn maturity.

Only write about what you know; also.

Bloodraine:

rage;love;clark:

OH NOES! NOT REPORTED TO THE GSB.NET ADMINS! WHATEVER SHALL I DO?

K you can shut up now.
Show some damn maturity.

Only write about what you know; also.

I'm the immature one? I'm not the one that decides all people's songs need to be ridiculously dark unless they aren't worthy of them. you can shut up too buddy. and i know what i write about.

K, I'm gonna lock this 'cause you're just arguing, and that is NOT what this is for ok?? If you decide you wont argue anymore, PM me and I'll unlock it.