ATTENTION! Just take it already.

This is something very different from the things I normally write. I just wanted to use rhyme this time, so I did.
There’s some irony hidden in this poem which you may and may not notice. Either way... never mind, just read it.


ATTENTION! Just take it already.

Crawl into a lonely hole and die
Say your prayers, say goodbye
Hold your breathe until you choke
Put an end to this joke

The rope suits the three in the yard
Kick the bucket, kick it hard
Raise a tombstone over your mind
Leave all of this behind

Your life is no more fun than these simple rhymes
Just admit it, it is the biggest waste of all times
Actually not even worth mentioning at all
It is too insignificant, it is a thing so small
So let’s end it before this grows too dull,
Here’s a hammer – crack open your skull.

I rully like that, my dearest.

Leave all this behind
Only, I think this line would flow better if you put an 'of' between 'all' and 'this'. Just a suggestion.

Haha, thank you, my sweetheart. I wrote it just a few seconds ago. It only took me like a minute. =P

Yep, you’re right. Thanx.

Ooooooh. Different. *watches poem from distance*

Only joking. Awesome

Dark but I like it.

hehehehe.....tis good...(evil stare)
i lurb it

Thank you guys! *bows*

*giggles*

That was so cool. Really.

that sounds like something i would have written back in 9th grade. all my songs wree about wanting my friends to die, because i hated them.

[QUOTE="Spirit Of do you still hate your friends?

SinfulDavey:

[QUOTE="Spirit Of do you still hate your friends?

well, i'm not really friends with those people anymore (because i hated them), but i do see one of them sometimes and we act civilized towards each other. i dont hate her anymore, but we're not best friends. the other one still hates me apparently, but i never see her so it doesnt matter.

Spirit Of '77:

that sounds like something i would have written back in 9th grade. all my songs wree about wanting my friends to die, because i hated them.

even though im not in the 9th grade it does sound like something someone would write about hating and wanting to kill there friends

it was dark.. sounded like nirvana actually... if it was a song... I would like to talk to you. so i will.. in PM format...

strummer92:

Spirit Of '77:

that sounds like something i would have written back in 9th grade. all my songs wree about wanting my friends to die, because i hated them.

even though im not in the 9th grade it does sound like something someone would write about hating and wanting to kill there friends

I would never want my friends to die. If I wished death upon someone I wouldn’t bother to be friends with that person. I do not hate anyone (check our my profile, see for yourselves lol) )and I this song/poem not directed at anyone specific.

snowcherry:

*giggles*

That was so cool. Really.

Ahhhh!:

it was dark.. sounded like nirvana actually... if it was a song... I would like to talk to you. so i will.. in PM format...

Thank you very much.

Brutal. I <3 it.

Thanks

Its good. Morbid, but good. *Tips hat*

Thanks *bows*

It is awesome, isn't it?!