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Dead End Girl
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | I got around to fixing this.
Rhymes x_o.
I've been reading the book and it inspired me to write this.
Bleh.
I hate it xD.
Killed them in the night
Done with love
Written on the walls
But mostly hate
Helter Skelter
Shot them down
Helter Skelter
Turned around
Helter Skelter
Bleed them dry
Helter Skelter
Watched them die
Starved of love
And sent from place to place
X'd from this world
Carved into your face
Helter Skelter
Shot them down
Helter Skelter
Turned around
Helter Skelter
Bleed them dry
Helter Skelter
Watched them die
Do you miss them Charlie?
Those girls you lead so well?
Do you miss them?
You drew them into hell
Helter Skelter
Shot them down
Helter Skelter
Turned around
Helter Skelter
Bleed them dry
Helter Skelter
Watched them die |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | It was okay. I don't really like rhyming. |
carmenxrae
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3 | that's really good... Helter Skelter's one of my favorite books. |
Buddy Christ
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 5821
 | pretty good. |
DaveyHavok666
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 250 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:25am That was pretty rad. I loved it. KEEP WRITING! |
strummer92
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1902 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:32am thats flippin awsome |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:32am That's...nice?
Haha.
Can I ask this: Who's Helter Skelter? |
FeeneyKid
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1325 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:35am Santa Billie:That's...nice?
Haha.
Can I ask this: Who's Helter Skelter? Charles Manson  |
strummer92
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1902 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:35am Santa Billie:That's...nice?
Haha.
Can I ask this: Who's Helter Skelter?
its not who
its a book based on the manson murders |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:39am Oh geez.
Not him again.
Why does everyone think he's this big bad dude?
I shall set out on a mission to discover the truth. |
strummer92
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1902 | July 8th, 2006 at 12:45am Santa Billie:Oh geez.
Not him again.
Why does everyone think he's this big bad dude?
I shall set out on a mission to discover the truth.
just read helter skelter |
Jay Tee
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Posts: 26777
 | July 8th, 2006 at 03:39pm Actually the book name was based on a song itself. Charles Manson was obsessed with the song Helter Skelter by The Beatles.
So thats where the book got the name from. So in all essence your song/poem is based on another song. |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | July 8th, 2006 at 03:48pm 409 Coffeemaker:Actually the book name was based on a song itself. Charles Manson was obsessed with the song Helter Skelter by The Beatles.
So thats where the book got the name from. So in all essence your song/poem is based on another song.
Actually, he just belived that The Beatles were sending him messages via their music.
He thought up all of the other stuff.
And The Beatles song 'Helter Skelter' is about going down a slide o__o; |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 8th, 2006 at 04:04pm I really liked it. Another great one by you. I loved the lines;
'Do you miss them Charlie?
Those girls you lead so well?
Do you miss them?
You drew them into hell' |
Jay Tee
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Posts: 26777
| July 8th, 2006 at 04:07pm Annie In Your Coffeemaker:409 Coffeemaker:Actually the book name was based on a song itself. Charles Manson was obsessed with the song Helter Skelter by The Beatles.
So thats where the book got the name from. So in all essence your song/poem is based on another song.
Actually, he just belived that The Beatles were sending him messages via their music.
He thought up all of the other stuff.
And The Beatles song 'Helter Skelter' is about going down a slide o__o;
Its not about the lyrics... although I guess they could be a euphemism for a mental breakdown...
Its the fact that it was the heaviest song ever when it was first released. There was no Sabbath, no Zeppelin, certainly no real punk. In fact the only other heavy songs of that time were by The Who and The Kinks which were rather more upbeat and happy. It was just dark and disturbing. Hard to realise really, considering we've all heard bands like Napalm Death! |
Good Day Sunshine
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Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 295 | July 8th, 2006 at 04:18pm 409 Coffeemaker:Annie In Your Coffeemaker:409 Coffeemaker:Actually the book name was based on a song itself. Charles Manson was obsessed with the song Helter Skelter by The Beatles.
So thats where the book got the name from. So in all essence your song/poem is based on another song.
Actually, he just belived that The Beatles were sending him messages via their music.
He thought up all of the other stuff.
And The Beatles song 'Helter Skelter' is about going down a slide o__o;
Its not about the lyrics... although I guess they could be a euphemism for a mental breakdown...
Its the fact that it was the heaviest song ever when it was first released. There was no Sabbath, no Zeppelin, certainly no real punk. In fact the only other heavy songs of that time were by The Who and The Kinks which were rather more upbeat and happy. It was just dark and disturbing. Hard to realise really, considering we've all heard bands like Napalm Death!
ture true
nice poem 
but yeah it came out in 1968 on the White Album,which was different from the albums coming out at that time.
in fact the White Album was very...how can i say it...kinda political?
well it was about what was happening around time
oh jeeez....thats was soo off topic.sorry |
