Prom

Ann stands in front of the mirror,
worried of her beautiful look,
Jay picks her up and compliments,
not knowing about the time it took

The prom was that day,
and Ann and Jay went together,
it was a horrible day,
that I'll remember forever

May went crazy cuz she loved Jay,
and Ann was her best friend, so it was not okay,
May hated Ann and also Jay,
and her heart was ruined, broken that way

Ann and Jay became king and queen,
and were the important people,
but May wanted to be queen,
and to have Jay by her side, was only a dream

So May took the spotlight,
she flipped out and killed them both,
I'll never forget that night,
But I swore to the oath

May couldn't take it, Ann had it all,
so May decided,
Ann and jay should both fall,
and May would have nothing at all

lol what do you think? i know it sucks... it's weird and i was just bored

It wasn't very unique or anything,
and I'm sure you can do better,
but I liked it for some reason.

thanks... i know it isn't unique or whatever... i was just blabbering...

I liked it I liked it alot. keep writing.. don't pay attention to what these Bumcheeks are saying.

~ Bullwinkie_With_Tre ~:

I liked it I liked it alot. keep writing.. don't pay attention to what these Bumcheeks are saying.

okay thabnks that means alot