Her Mask of Beauty

I know it's not the greatest. I was bored when I wrote it and thought why not post it...so please don't bash my poetry too much!

“Her Mask of Beauty”

She looks at the lovely copy of her own features.
She smirks at the echo of lunacy.

She interrogates her pastel, velvet face.
She adores her rosy, red lined lips.
She sees her heavy, mute blue eyes grin back at her.
She touches her recently bleached hair, that appears so genuine.
She stares at her up-to-the-minute jeans and flowing, attractive shirt.

She knows she has completed herself...
she is now, at last, a replica of someone else.
She is scared to take off her cover of plastic which she has made.
She is the only one that knows the real reality.
She is not truly herself.
She is just as synthetic as one and all.
She weeps because she imagines she can not turn back.

Good. But a little repetitive. The 'she' gets a little tedious after a while.

But it was good.

Can't say I'm a fan. It's quite monotonous. I like the overall idea, but you've worded it badly.

What are you people talking about?

THAT WAS GREAT!!!

international_idiot:

Good. But a little repetitive. The 'she' gets a little tedious after a while.

But it was good.

Yeah, you definitely need to do something about the "she"s.

The repetition isn´t needed in my opinion. The rest was wonderful, you´re good with words.

it was pretty.

I like it but you could've tried a "He" for some "She"s xD