I rocked the boat

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*they_call_me Ri*
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*they_call_me Ri*
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May 6th, 2006 at 10:18am
Sitting at the top of the world.
I thought i'd be satisfied,
By your kiss, by your touch.

I pushed you away
And bruised your affection
This problem needs correction.

Ice blue eyes intrance me
Your lips beckon me
To one last kiss.

Second thoughts of jumping
Off the top; yours eyes will catch me
As i hit the ground.

Rocking the boat never ends up
As you planned.
Spitting words out into the air
Pressure piont it's about to break.

No fear inhabits my body
except the one I have of you.

Iknmow it seems rushee and not well written but i wantedt o get my thoughts out.
if you couldn t tell my compu ter is being stu pid.
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
love.
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May 6th, 2006 at 12:19pm
thats good!! Smile
Ol' Blue Eyes.
King For A Couple Of Days
Ol' Blue Eyes.
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Mibba
May 6th, 2006 at 12:56pm
I actually like that alot.
Props to you.
Very Happy
Ruby Soho
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Ruby Soho
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May 7th, 2006 at 01:17am
Thats good.
xXx depressed_emo xXx
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May 7th, 2006 at 02:32am
*claps hands*
Music to my ears
Idiot
Music to my ears
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May 7th, 2006 at 07:01am
great poem! it rocked!
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