fakeing a smile

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warning. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3663	May 6th, 2006 at 12:39pm how does it feel to know your living a lie all the people that suround you just fakeing a smile his kiss on your lips and his heart in his pants he was so good at what he called romance he told me he loved me and that we would go far no matter if we were apart they said they'd always care and teach me all i lack then they walked away and laughed behind my back i was a fool to believe i was there friend i believed them when they said theyd be here untill the end how does it feel to see the love of your life just leave come back to reality and realise that it was all make belive he isnt coming back for me i fell so easily for his charm but it was just another broken heart just another mistake another dosefull of pain how does it feel to know your living a lie all the people that suround you just fakeing a smile how does it feel to know your the one that makes me cry all the scars and the tears and the broken hearts was it worth all the pain and the hurt to still love you is suicide to my heart how does it feel to know these are your last breaths your bleeding on the floor a thousand tear drops how does it feel to realise this is the end of the book the fairy tale has come to and end theres no more pain to hide from your friends how does it feel now everyone knows you were just living a lie trying your best to fake a smile
Zoe;; Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1829	May 6th, 2006 at 12:42pm Omg dude that is fuking awsome u brought a tear to my eye
warning. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3663	May 6th, 2006 at 01:44pm thanks xx
losers_are_cool King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4120	May 6th, 2006 at 03:12pm Sophie my dear, your poetry has grown from fantastic and beautiful, to absolutely stunning. Out of the many I have read, this is definitely one of your best. I'm so sorry for everything you feel. But I'm here if you need to talk. Or just need someone to rant to. This was amazing, and I'm teary now. Thanks a lot. <3
Ruby Soho Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 465	May 6th, 2006 at 03:33pm Your very talented. The poem is awesome.
warning. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3663	May 6th, 2006 at 03:34pm rawwwwwwwwwwwwr thank you hunnie xxx im feeling alright now i was just a bit screwed up with my feelings stuff with my mates and just meh other stuff but me be ok now all happy and looking forward to tomorow seeing my mates yeyness xxx missing talking to you on msn hunnie i got a new one by teh way tis teh-spoon@hotmail.co.uk xx love ya hunxx
°MorbidRose° Jackass Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1723	May 6th, 2006 at 03:59pm Wow, that's amazing, as usual. I haven't been on in so long. I just want to read poems by some familiar peot's. I love your stuff always. I loved this line: to still love you is suicide to my heart. <3 Sandy
warning. King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3663	May 6th, 2006 at 07:52pm °MorbidRose°: Wow, that's amazing, as usual. I haven't been on in so long. I just want to read poems by some familiar peot's. I love your stuff always. I loved this line: to still love you is suicide to my heart. <3 Sandy ah i love that line wat a shame i didnt write that line i was stuck for something to put and my friend kimmie helped me out love ya lots kimmie <3 and everyone else love ya loads <3
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 6th, 2006 at 09:59pm meh tis is mi poem but iv screwed up my acount and cant get back onto it so had to register again xx
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727	May 6th, 2006 at 10:24pm It was great, except for the many spelling errors.
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 6th, 2006 at 10:25pm ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry xxxx
well.durr__hXc™ King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3226	May 6th, 2006 at 10:28pm Basket*Case: It was great, except for the many spelling errors.
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727	May 6th, 2006 at 10:38pm teh-spoon: ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry xxxx It's okay. It was a great poem anyway.
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 6th, 2006 at 10:47pm Basket*Case: teh-spoon: ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry xxxx It's okay. It was a great poem anyway. thanks xx for the next time i write a poem ill try my best to remeber to go through it and correct all the spelling xx just for you xx
xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186	May 7th, 2006 at 02:36am good going.......... do u like atreyu then?
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 7th, 2006 at 08:39am punk_rock_fan_1988: good going.......... do u like atreyu then? er thanks ..and aint really heard any music but atreyu :S
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32	May 8th, 2006 at 04:43pm dies
Baguelle King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2727	May 8th, 2006 at 09:37pm teh-spoon: Basket*Case: teh-spoon: ah i still havnt got any better at spelling twas always the main thing i got critisised on im a terribul speller sorry xxxx It's okay. It was a great poem anyway. thanks xx for the next time i write a poem ill try my best to remeber to go through it and correct all the spelling xx just for you xx Haha, thanks.

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