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| greendaypunksliveforever Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie  Age: - Gender: - Posts: 58 | |
| greendaypunksliveforever Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 58 | |
| greendaypunksliveforever Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 58 | |
| greendaypunksliveforever Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 58 | |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495  | |
| Babi Kid Rachy King For A Couple Of Days Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4512 | A pretty good try.  |
| Santa Billie Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 8285 | Um...there wasn't much flow and I didn't even notice a rhyme scheme. I think you should try NOT to rhyme. Most great poets of this era don't rhyme, and the ones that do almost always fail at writing a decent poem. If you feel comfortable with rhyming, then do that, but try not to rhyme for once. I think it could make you feel more free  |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 | |
| Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844  | This is the song, these are my words Scribbled down, not thought about Releasing pain, churning it to lyrics Let down, let in without a single doubt  It's beautiful, hun. You keep working on it, and it'll be awesome. |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | This is the song, these are my words Unmeaningful lyrics, fucked up in every way Singing it, making it feel wanted within This is where the words I wrote lay Hun, this is great! <3 The only thing I never find I like in poetry are swears. It kind of ruins the emotion of the stanzas. But you still pulled it off. Keep writing! |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | Teh Coolest Mohican....:  I love you too.  |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | Teh Coolest Mohican....:Never? Wow. XD And pfft your face. I love you infinity +1 |
| Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844 | Teh Coolest Mohican....: No problem. =] I enjoyed reading this. I hope you write more. |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | Teh Coolest Mohican....:  Pfft your mom.[//spamming] xD |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 |  I already do. Damn straight. |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | Teh Coolest Mohican....:I'm adding you to my friends list. Is that okay? |
| It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | Teh Coolest Mohican....:   I don't have MSN. xDI have yahoo. -is added- |
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