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greendaypunksliveforever
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
greendaypunksliveforever
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May 7th, 2006 at 08:51pm
Am I really that awkward: that the mental institute opened an apointment
That I have a segment with Doctor Phil on my hurts and my hearts
That I was uninvited to a flipping party
In the cafetiria I swared I was a vegitarean, now a red meat but it was never true
I enjoy the scent of blood and laugh at it too
Am I really telling my freinds the truth?
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Misanthropist
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279
May 7th, 2006 at 09:15pm
I didn't like it at all. I'm sorry. It didn't seem very poem-ish and there was alot of bad choices in words. A few words were spelt wrong as well.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
May 8th, 2006 at 05:08am
That was interesting.
And different.
greendaypunksliveforever
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
greendaypunksliveforever
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May 8th, 2006 at 03:11pm
I'm so sorry about this poem, I would like to say that I didn't write it. My freind told me that she had posted something under my name, bascilly haCKING INTO MY ACCOUNT. sHE SAID THAT SHE WROTE IT FROM MY POINT OF VEIW AND STUFF, i DON'T LIKE IT AT ALL SHE IS MAKING FUN OF ME!
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Geek
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May 9th, 2006 at 04:23am
it is pretty crap lol
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