lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
  | This is actually meant for my band, but I'm really proud of it and I want to show it off.
Its called Becoming You.
Becoming You
When I think about what's happened to me
I see your face in my place
Because I realize everything I did
Was everything you did to me
While waiting to be set free
I've become everything you were
Make it stop.
Don't make it hurt anymore.
The shame and sin of what I did
The restless nights and unwilling fights
My disgusting smile in response to their screams
This is what you've made me
This time I know that
In the end
You are what's become of me
Drunk perversion and violent persuasion
The unholy Crusades, an alien invasion
Upon my body, you feasted on my soul
You stronger with my cries
And I don't dare to control
You or me
While waiting to be set free
I've become everything you were
Make it stop
I know you can't hurt me anymore
The shame and sin of what I did
The restless nights and unwilling fights
My disgusting smile in response to their screams
This is what you've made me
This time I know that
In the end
You are what's become of me
So why have I chosen a victim in the name of repulsive deeds?
Why have I let you plant within me your evil crop and seeds?
Why do I hear my shrieks and taste the salt of my own tears
When my prisoner comes to mind?
How is it that you haunt me when you are captured and confined?
I breathed in your lies and bore your legacy
While waiting to be set free
I've become everything you were
Make it stop, make it fucking stop!!
I won't let you hurt me anymore.
Now someone else is dying
Becoming everything I am
Becoming you
I'm everyting you were
But I'll make it stop, I'll kill your memory
You won't hurt anyone anymore.
The shame and sin of what I did
The restless nights and unwilling fights
My disgusting smile in response to their screams
This is what you've made me
This time I know that
In the end
You are what's become of me
You've made me everything you were
You've destroyed me, I'll destroy you back
Leave you lying on the floor.
Well...comments, compliments, words of praise or hate? All's welcome. It was actually inspired by some lines from a GSB story called "Billie how could you? I'm your wife!" and a line from my own GSB story. So props to the author of that story for giving me those lines. |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
| Hey, uh, I guess no one has the patience to read and give me a comment? oh well. I like my poem and everyone has to know!!!!! capiche????? |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | I think it's pretty good  |
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278
| No one else wants to comment? Pleasey? pleaseness? |
radioactive
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 338
| its awsome i love it very good *claps* |
