teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32 | the tears still roll down her face
everything seemed so perfect
everything felt so right
and here she lies tonight
bleeding on the floor
underneath the stars
the blood stained knife lyes in her arms
this is shot meh |
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 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 34269 | I like it. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times. |
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 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 34269 | Ella:It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times. Wow, that's an awesome way how to encourage the author. |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| Harlequin Girl:Ella:It sucked. It's been done about 34095744395793046 times. Wow, that's an awesome way how to encourage the author.
I'm just brutally honest. |
teh-spoon Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 32 | May 10th, 2006 at 04:32am and honesty is appriciated
it did suck
and has been done about
34095744395793046 times.
but iv also written like 100 poems so i kinda
have ran out of stuff to say in them
iv came across writters block again
ill go write more when the feeling comes to me
and work on it before i post |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 10th, 2006 at 04:39am teh-spoon:and honesty is appriciated
it did suck
and has been done about
34095744395793046 times.
but iv also written like 100 poems so i kinda
have ran out of stuff to say in them
iv came across writters block again
ill go write more when the feeling comes to me
and work on it before i post
I appreciate that. I hope that next time you will share something better  |