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imtwasidwelya
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:14pm
My heart pours out in this freezing rain
crying madly again and again
it's only as strong as it's weakest link
my love pours down a kitchen sink

That used to be my life
I no longer feel that knife
the edge has lost its sharpness

I am so stupid
for being torn apart by cupid
not free now
can't speak now
and so weak now
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:15pm
Nicely Done.Smile
hidude10
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:18pm
That was really cool.
Not totally sure what it was talking about, but I like alot of the phases in it.
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:18pm
What inspired this poem?
imtwasidwelya
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May 9th, 2006 at 08:19pm
Heartache and not being able to talk about it.
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 04:10am
Forced.
imtwasidwelya
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May 10th, 2006 at 04:52am
It started as my lyrics but I turned it into a poem and changed it from being suicidal to something different.
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