Baby Doll Sickness (Sonnet 21)

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Peter Petrelli
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Peter Petrelli
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May 10th, 2006 at 02:28pm
I don't really know how to explain this one. Retard

He's her patron saint of soft affection;
a mortal poet and great romantic.
Her shimmering wings are inspiration,
to a fizzy soul and hive of lyrics
as pure as pearls are silk. Her gentle touch
against his faded, sickly flesh helps heal
his broken eyes; reverse what was too much.
Only baby doll emotions can steal
dark magic away from the heart and bring
back content faerie tales. A kiss of life
and a few doting words can soothe feeling
back to her magically drenched veins. Sharp, knifed
aggression of violent spells; mysteries
of mythology are to sick to see...
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 03:00pm
¡Ay mi Dios! ¡Qué bonito! Very Happy
Inari
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May 10th, 2006 at 03:10pm
Awww that's sweet.
What's in a name?
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 03:11pm
I love it sooooo much. Very Happy
snowcherry
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May 10th, 2006 at 03:37pm
Oh my.
That was so so so so sweet.
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 10th, 2006 at 04:04pm
What's in a name?:
I love it sooooo much. Very Happy
It Had to Be You.
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May 10th, 2006 at 05:09pm
snowcherry:
Oh my.
That was so so so so sweet.
<33infinity x1 Retard
Baguelle
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May 11th, 2006 at 12:39am
Wow. That was moving, honestly. Well done! Very confusing, but I like when poems or songs are like that. I like to think about the point. Very Happy Again, well done.
killing loneliness
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May 11th, 2006 at 05:02am
damn do i love your sonnets...it's soooooo...what did my frienc all this typev of poetry? oh yeah, dead romantic writing suffocatingly beautiful poetry.
killing loneliness
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May 11th, 2006 at 05:03am
killing loneliness:
damn do i love your sonnets...it's soooooo...what did my frienc all this typev of poetry? oh yeah, dead romantic writing suffocatingly beautiful poetry.

love it...don't mind the typos...
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May 11th, 2006 at 06:06am
i liked it. =]
Peter Petrelli
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May 11th, 2006 at 10:53am
Basket*Case:
Wow. That was moving, honestly. Well done! Very confusing, but I like when poems or songs are like that. I like to think about the point. Very Happy Again, well done.


I guess I should've explained it, really. I write a lot of fantasy, and it was supposed to be a young couple trying to reassure one another after being poisoned by dark magic... it's all very confusing, so don't worry Wink Just the way I like it.

Thank you, angels.
MistressDoom
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May 12th, 2006 at 03:42am
*claps loudly*

VERY VERY VERY GOOD!
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