imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 10th, 2006 at 09:43pm I'm so confused
I don't have any
understanding anymore
Where am I
do I
even
have a clue?
I am not alone
this I do know
I don't believe in competition
I do believe in trust
I hope I'm
no criminal
But is knowing
understanding
or are they
different
if so then
maybe I'm
a hypocrite
oh well |
Tahm York
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 | May 10th, 2006 at 09:47pm it was ok |
It Had to Be You.
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Posts: 3593 | May 10th, 2006 at 11:50pm you can't sell feelings:it was ok True.
All your poems are too short. You need more originality and also some inspiration. Better luck next time I suppose. |
Sara.
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Posts: 31155 | May 10th, 2006 at 11:57pm Panagiotakos.<3:you can't sell feelings:it was ok True.
All your poems are too short. You need more originality and also some inspiration. Better luck next time I suppose. agreed |
Baguelle
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Posts: 2727 | May 11th, 2006 at 12:35am It's just blah. I wouldn't say it's good, but it isn't horrible. To me, it seems pointless. I hate to say that about a poem, but yeah. I don't know. |
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Posts: 78 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:49am meh... [shrugs] hehe hypocrite is a funny word... dunno why... ._. |
