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Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:02pm So this is my attempt to make a happy poem. ;D
I wanna dedicate it to someone...
Kay. This is dedicated to Inari, 'cause she's cool like that. <3
Optimism Through Delicate Annihilation
Dying rays, the bitter remnants
of the reminiscent morning glories;
Petals, such as eyes,
flicker in and out of reality;
Shadows, hues, tints of crimson shadows
dance across their irises.
But a life span so short, it is almost haunted beauty…
Doomed, to eternal passion,
but to perish in the flames of magenta mists;
Shrouding impaled minds of the dawn’s adventures,
but unable to attain them; beyond the reaches,
innocent and unworthy glimpses of our blinded eyes…
The fire is burning too obscure,
distorted visions of torching lights;
Synoptic eruptions of these abstrustive streaks,
volcanoes embed deep reflections upon our thoughts…
Where snow is golden, rain is transparent…
Where clouds are solid ice, and ash spreads
across meadows like grass…
Yet it burns,
like…
Wildfire.
Breathing spontaneously, spread the elation,
assimilate the truth with precious imagination.
Vivid adrenaline, rushing aimlessly through massacred veins.
Where humanity once flowed,
now emblazed by the engulfing lunacy;
The mirror response to the inquired wonders…
The coveted decoys of diminishing freedom…
Fading in requiems,
the purple convulsions dissipate…
The crimson, the orange, the pinks,
absolute serenity;
but a disaster in disguise.
Fading all the black, fading to the dusk…
Enter faeries of sudden conclusion,
luminous emeralds, browns,
shimmering close to fuzzy auras…
A single embodiment of divinity.
And their angels came to encourage them,
double edged swords, the scepters of tranquility
guide them through the mysteries…
constellations.
Glowings we’ve only made assumptions too,
but some mysteries were made to remain unknown…
Covered, buried underneath the “proper revolutions”…
Camouflaged distances from the opaque demeanors…
For they cannot take initiative,
placed beneath the dullest cobwebs…
Exit the silent serenade of the crystal autumn nocturnes… |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:13pm That's gorgeous  I love your happy poems. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:24pm That's amazing. I'm sure Inari will be flattered. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:27pm ^_^ Thanks guys! |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:29pm It's sooo great.
Same as usual, sweetie.  |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:34pm 
Oh my.
A dedication.
For once in my little life, you've rendered me speechless, darling.
That was so beautiful.
Thank you.
You rock, my little poetic dumpling. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 11th, 2006 at 01:41pm TALENT!!! PURE TALENT
I envy EVERYONE on this board...
I hate you all with your talent -___- |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:25pm Awws....*feels loved and special and everything else* <33 |
alexalexsuarez!
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 376 | May 11th, 2006 at 05:27pm ohmygosh... a happy poem? =]
YAY.... LOVED IT. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 11th, 2006 at 05:44pm =O I am outraged that you did not dedicate it to me!
XD I'm just kidding. So, uh, I loved it! |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:34pm Breathing spontaneously, spread the elation,
assimilate the truth with precious imagination.
Vivid adrenaline, rushing aimlessly through massacred veins.
Where humanity once flowed,
now emblazed by the engulfing lunacy;
The mirror response to the inquired wonders…
The coveted decoys of diminishing freedom…
Fading in requiems,
the purple convulsions dissipate…
The crimson, the orange, the pinks,
absolute serenity;
but a disaster in disguise.
I'm impressed. <3 I love it. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:37pm I actually wrote it about like...sunset becoming night o_o |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 11th, 2006 at 06:39pm XxBillieOwnsXx:I actually wrote it about like...sunset becoming night o_o Hah! So I was right! XD |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 11th, 2006 at 06:42pm Oh yes, your brilliance unsheathed...XDD |
*they_call_me Ri*
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | May 11th, 2006 at 09:06pm Very Nice!! Bravo!! |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | May 11th, 2006 at 09:14pm I just read the title and I new it was by you. ^_^ It was fantastic, as always |
MistressDoom
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 108 | May 12th, 2006 at 03:41am Damn, if only I was as good as you... |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:38am sdfjkasdjfk. I'm blushing.
>>;;;
XD
Mistress Doom, if ya want help...I'm here. =] |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:42am That's.. OMGLYKWOW!!!11-worthy |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 12th, 2006 at 07:03am Omg!  |
