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rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:23am Here we go...
All I know is where I’m headed
Is never what you intended
But if you just give me a chance
I’ll never come quietly
You’ll have to come and see me
But you’ll never give me a second glance
Cause you don’t want me to be
What I want me to be
You place paths in front of me
And expect me to beg for mercy
Well no more
No more hiding behind
Well no more
I will not be so kind
No more
No more
No more
For me
Now you ask me where I’m going
Around the house I’m not showing
But if you just let me live
Now I see what you made me
How hard I try to escape me
You take and expect me to give
Cause you don’t want me to be
What I want me to be
You place paths in front of me
And expect me to beg for mercy
Well no more
No more hiding behind
Well no more
I will not be so kind
No more
No more
No more
For me
I was always taught follow your dreams
Not follow your dreams if it’s respected by society
I want to
I want to believe
Cause I wanted to believe everything that you said
But when you talk to me that way, I wish I were dead
So I follow chapters of this scripted life
Maybe in the streets I’ll meet up with edge of a knife
And you would be right
You would have won
My final fight
The end of this fun
Maybe I’ll be more than just your fucking puppet
I’m gonna live this life and damn I’m gonna love it |
Sylar
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 5703 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:25am I like this a lot. I mean I really, REALLY like it! Better than the shite I come up with! |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:29am Mikko Lindstrom:I like this a lot. I mean I really, REALLY like it! Better than the shite I come up with!
w00t!!! thanks, i am really pissed at my parents right now if you can tell. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:48am Wow thats great!  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:54am B.J:Wow thats great!
yay i wrote a good song! lol. thanks guys. |
Sylar
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 5703 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:55am You're welcome sweetheart |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 12th, 2006 at 08:55am rage;love;clark:B.J:Wow thats great!
yay i wrote a good song! lol. thanks guys.
you're welcome |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 12th, 2006 at 11:22am That's cool. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 12th, 2006 at 11:40am Inari:That's cool.
shanks  |
rage;love;courtney
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 20 | May 12th, 2006 at 04:53pm ooooo i like it
it's awesome
lol |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 12th, 2006 at 04:56pm I like dat too.  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 12th, 2006 at 04:57pm rage;love;courtney:ooooo i like it
it's awesome
lol
w000t my girlfriend likes my poetry! lol |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | May 12th, 2006 at 06:46pm Eh...
It wasn't particularly stunning in my opinon.
It seemed repetitive...
But cha' ^^.
It was good. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 13th, 2006 at 07:25am ^Agreed. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | May 13th, 2006 at 05:46pm Ella:^Agreed.
thanks for some criticism, seriously. |
