imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 12th, 2006 at 11:39pm The force rises on the wind
warming the shadows around,
penetrating our bodies as we talk
about stories of memories of
happy moments, of pain, of caring
the force's source keeps us company
along with the cold night air
and then I realize that
you really are there
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The motivation behind the poem is about people behind thier computer screens and how they actually have feelings and how the computers are really the tools they use to speak with.
The poem takes on the metaphor of sitting around a campfire. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
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 | May 13th, 2006 at 07:08am I'm no longer willing to give advice because you don't seem to listen. |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 14th, 2006 at 09:54am Ella:I'm no longer willing to give advice because you don't seem to listen. |
imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 14th, 2006 at 10:14am The force symbolizes warmth. |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3593 | May 14th, 2006 at 10:15am What's in a name?:Ella:I'm no longer willing to give advice because you don't seem to listen.  |
