killing loneliness
Idiot
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Posts: 572 | May 14th, 2006 at 02:18pm shimmering gemstones
enlighting the room
curtains blocking the moonlight
thought stars shine still
hold your teddy bear
tightly in your arms
fight for your life
don't let them take it away
run away dear angel
purest of pure
their hands shredding the ends of
your creamy white dress
your aching feet
carrying you far away
untill you can run no more
and fall to pieces on the road
wake up before they reach you
stand up and run
where your feet will carry you
falling and rising, again and again
you already feel
the cold snow
underneath your feet
you shiver all over
you finaly reach
the land of spring
to finally whipe the tears
off of your pretty face |
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161 | May 14th, 2006 at 02:21pm Pretty  I liked that. Awesome imagery. |
Inari
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Posts: 2538 | May 14th, 2006 at 02:25pm That's sweet. |
killing loneliness
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Posts: 572 | May 14th, 2006 at 02:27pm thank you..so you all know..Maddy...the star of my other poems is no longer going to be a carackter in my poems any more..she got her happy ending so now the carackters in the poems which are yet unwritten have a different carackter. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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 | May 14th, 2006 at 03:25pm That's pretty good.
And just so you know, it's spelled "character".  |
It Had to Be You.
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Posts: 3593 | May 14th, 2006 at 11:17pm international_idiot:Pretty I liked that. Awesome imagery. Spoken from a true poetic genius. |
killing loneliness
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Posts: 572 | May 15th, 2006 at 01:03am [Flawless Error]:That's pretty good.
And just so you know, it's spelled "character".
thanks loads...i knew i did something wrong lol. i like it when people correct my mistakes. |
