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Eliana Rampage
Jackass
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Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 05:32pm 2 Important things...
1) This is dedicated and about His Dark Materials. They are an incredible series of books, I bawl my eyes out every time I finish them. I really would love it if you read them, BEFORE the movie comes out in January (Which I am actually looking forward to ^_^)
2) Folks...This is poem...
NUMBER 99.
99.
YES. 99.
ONE MORE.
Enjoy!
The Truth Lies Unveiled Where You Least Expect
Severed martyrdom obscures her mangled face;
For that is the mirror of her childhood.
Reflections of daemons, angels,
colliding elements of divine mystery.
Swirls of particles divide all existing fear;
Subtle knives amputate them to trivial oblivion;
The truth, golden in its glory, light the way to paradise;
Away, averting the collisions of elated souls;
Cleaving to the others warmth,
drenched in elusive passion,
love.
Never stray, never venture too far away…
All can be discovered simply beside you…
The shadows of the cosmos can pave the paths,
abstrusive, unknown…
Brace yourself, taste the falling Dust…
The rosy amber spyglass reveals the hidden;
Endless spectrums of blinding colors;
Clashing bodies, but yet as one, united…
Entities of hues, of colors unnamed.
Leave us in trances where emotion bears no face.
Where emotion is but a word unnecessary,
for why feel when we know the truth?
Temptation, downfalls, dimensions misconceive;
All lead to fate, befallen destiny, our forgotten enemies.
Battle until death, or the uncertainties beyond it;
For what lies ahead is gray and dusk;
Where the colors fade to nothing,
right before our dulling eyes.
Where the cataract overcomes,
our irises refrain to the deepest chasms of our hearts;
But our hearts have been thrown aside…
Our Death has abandoned them.
None left to die for, as the Dust recedes, fading away…
Our childhood with it, as the Specters remain.
And the truth lies low, mocking, waiting…
For the triumph of battle, the sunrise of our freedom. |
alexalexsuarez!
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 376 | May 14th, 2006 at 05:44pm 99? Damn. 
I loved it, but not as much as i love you.  |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 05:45pm Fashions_Worst_Victim:99? Damn.
I loved it, but not as much as i love you.
OMGOMGOMG MAKEOUTSESSIONINTHECLOSET.
*runs away shrieking*
XDDDDDDDDDDD |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 14th, 2006 at 05:58pm ZOMGZ NUMBER NINETY-FRIGGIN-NINE NO WAY!!!11ONEFOUR
That means 99 lovely awesome poems by you. 
Now we just have to wait and see if you can write one more. Can you do it!? Can you do it!? Gahahahahha. XD |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 06:02pm XDDDDDD
Ya. I think I can. Pwnnn. |
Tahm York
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 31394
 | May 14th, 2006 at 06:16pm your poems make me sad because you are so good and I stink
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Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 06:17pm O.O WTF MATE.
I always am a PM away if you want help and you do not stink. If anyone does it's me XD |
Milk
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 3741
| May 14th, 2006 at 09:07pm XxBillieOwnsXx:O.O WTF MATE.
I always am a PM away if you want help and you do not stink. If anyone does it's me XD but you do not stink, you are one of the best poets to ever grace GSB. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 09:08pm <3 I wish...you guys are the nicest people I've ever met o_o |
Ruby Soho
Geek
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Posts: 465 | May 14th, 2006 at 09:10pm Its great.
Really great. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
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Posts: 1958 | May 14th, 2006 at 10:05pm Thanks.  |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3593 | May 14th, 2006 at 11:23pm Bless you dahling for existing; otherwise, there wouldn't be such magnificent poetry like yours today.
Lisa luffs choo immensely. <3 |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 15th, 2006 at 05:13am Love it!!!!
Gah!
And there's going to be a movie?
I didn't know! I love those books.
They should so stay together at the end. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 15th, 2006 at 06:35am You amaze me, angel 
:shoc: 99? 99!!! |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 15th, 2006 at 06:41am 99!? YES! 99!!!
XDDD
*huggles all you poetry dears*
I love you guys sooo much |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 09:10am You should stop saying that you’re no good because that’s just a pathetic lie, dear.
Does everyone here keep lying when they tell you that they love your poems?
No, I don’t think so. You’re obviously great. Accept that now. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 15th, 2006 at 09:30am What's in a name?:You should stop saying that you’re no good because that’s just a pathetic lie, dear.
Does everyone here keep lying when they tell you that they love your poems?
No, I don’t think so. You’re obviously great. Accept that now.
 IT'S ALL CONSPIRACY.
CONSPIRACY! *shakes fist in the air*
XDD |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 09:38am You’re crazy! Fine, you can think you’re worthless (even though you aren’t)
as long as you don’t mention anything about it. |
Eliana Rampage
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1958 | May 15th, 2006 at 09:40am What's in a name?: You’re crazy! Fine, you can think you’re worthless (even though you aren’t)
as long as you don’t mention anything about it.
NO NO I'M NOT BAD DON'T KILL ME ;__; FINE I DON'T SUCK.
...But still...
CONSPIRACY!!!! GRAB THE CHILDREN FLEE THE COUNTRY!!! |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 09:41am Oh Eli, that's amazing as usual  |
