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newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | May 15th, 2006 at 10:33am ...for you, Katie Moss, for breaking his heart. One day you'll realize the fragile beauty you left behind.
The masterplan to this riddle
Are the young hopes left behind,
And all the scrapheap memories
Of broken promises
You are yet to find.
Swinging cradles will hum melodies.
The pillow fights of angels and thieves;
One more example of asymethry,
Such as tree tops
And archaic misbeliefs.
In Paris you'll seek for romance,
A young lad to steal his heart away.
Days will pass by so slowly.
Your frail face will stare upon
The empty ashtray. |
imtwasidwelya
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 357 | May 15th, 2006 at 10:35am It needs a spell check and other than that it is good.  |
Meski
Addict
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
 | May 15th, 2006 at 10:36am NIce poem u did a good job mon!! |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 10:36am imtwasidwelya:It needs a spell check and other than that it is good.
Thanks. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 15th, 2006 at 10:52am That's cool. I really like that. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | May 15th, 2006 at 11:15am I really loved it  Real pretty, and I love the words you used. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 11:18am Thank you, my poetry sweethearts.
I kind of feel bad for dedicating a poem to her, because I'll never forgive her for what she did.
Oh well... It's out in the open now. |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 12:04pm That's great. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | May 15th, 2006 at 12:30pm That was great <3 |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 15th, 2006 at 12:33pm Ella:...for you, Katie Moss, for breaking his heart. One day you'll realize the fragile beauty you left behind.
*nods*
It was really pretty.
Love it.  |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 12:45pm snowcherry:Ella:...for you, Katie Moss, for breaking his heart. One day you'll realize the fragile beauty you left behind.
*nods*
It was really pretty.
Love it.
I'm glad someone agrees.
Thank you <3 |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 15th, 2006 at 12:47pm Ella:snowcherry:Ella:...for you, Katie Moss, for breaking his heart. One day you'll realize the fragile beauty you left behind.
*nods*
It was really pretty.
Love it.
I'm glad someone agrees.
Thank you <3
And I sooo do agree. *nods some more* |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 12:53pm snowcherry:
And I sooo do agree. *nods some more*
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snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | May 15th, 2006 at 12:56pm |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 02:24pm Ella:Thank you, my poetry sweethearts.
I kind of feel bad for dedicating a poem to her, because I'll never forgive her for what she did.
Oh well... It's out in the open now. It's beautiful Ella. Just like all your other poems. But who's heart did she break? I'm so confused. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 02:59pm Panagiotakos.<3:Ella:Thank you, my poetry sweethearts.
I kind of feel bad for dedicating a poem to her, because I'll never forgive her for what she did.
Oh well... It's out in the open now. It's beautiful Ella. Just like all your other poems. But who's heart did she break? I'm so confused.
Pete Doherty's |
ancient
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 29697
| May 15th, 2006 at 03:01pm That was amazing x4.
Great job. <3333 |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 03:03pm WTF.:That was amazing x4.
Great job. <3333
 |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| May 15th, 2006 at 03:55pm OMG IT'S AN ELLA POEM!!!11
It's about time you posted another one, missy. 
I could just make out with it. Oh heck, why not? |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| May 15th, 2006 at 04:28pm [Flawless Error]:OMG IT'S AN ELLA POEM!!!11
It's about time you posted another one, missy.
I could just make out with it. Oh heck, why not?
=]
You're sweet. |
