Soldiers Needed- Continued

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Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 15th, 2006 at 11:32am Love it. nods
imtwasidwelya Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357	May 15th, 2006 at 11:34am This one gives me a feeling of pain. I am printing it out also. Are you going through the grief stages in this?
imtwasidwelya Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 357	May 15th, 2006 at 12:00pm The subject of this one and the way it was presented makes me want to put forth more of an effort to get involved in anti-war efforts the world over.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 15th, 2006 at 12:14pm It’s real good. Kind cliché in a way, but it works.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 16th, 2006 at 01:28pm lol, I meant the whole subject, you know? And since you haven’t used too unique metaphors and words it’s similar to other war poems. That’s what I meant by cliché. But don’t worry, I like it.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 16th, 2006 at 01:53pm Hey, no problem. I strongly believe you’re ganna be able to write a mind blowing, completely awesome poem one day.

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