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What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 01:08pm Dedicated to my lovely boyfriend.
I love to watch him sleep.
In the Sea of Sleep
A quiet breeze sweeps athwart the pillow and
Waves floats across the silk quilt cover as
The ragged angle stirs in his healing slumber.
Lost in a sea of dreams far a way from the acing,
Of his fractured heart which slowly heals, he
Allows his tender lips to form a joyous smile.
Ripples appear on the sheets as he flows further,
Drifting away into oblivious tranquility.
He turns and creates tidal waves that washes over
him, nearly waking him up but doesn’t quite do it.
Instead he sinks back into the ocean deep doze,
With the smile freshly repainted upon his face.
His damaged, polluted angel wings are drenched
In the sweet fragments of his lingering dreams
As he wakes, but it is not enough to clean them.
All the hopeful, glad thoughts that sailed on his mind
Crashes upon the reeves of reality as he rises to face
A new day in the dust dry realm known as life. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | May 15th, 2006 at 01:13pm Awwwwwww. *hates you for having someone to watch over*
It's beautiful. A few spelling errors, but still stunning  |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 15th, 2006 at 01:22pm Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
It's so so cute.  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 15th, 2006 at 01:25pm Awww that is so damn beautiful. |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | May 15th, 2006 at 01:58pm What's in a name?:
I love to watch him sleep.
lol, does he know that ?!
Whatever .. that was so sweet  |
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 02:00pm A quiet breeze sweeps athwart the pillow and
Waves floats across the silk quilt cover as
The ragged angle stirs in his healing slumber.
Lost in a sea of dreams far a way from the acing,
Of his fractured heart which slowly heals, he
Allows his tender lips to form a joyous smile.
Rose, dear, I loved this part. Hell, I luff choo. <33
Great job!  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 02:32pm Thank you, my dear. Luff choo too!  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 02:34pm Thank you, my poetic butterflies.
TreCoolistsogeil:What's in a name?:
I love to watch him sleep.
lol, does he know that ?!
Whatever .. that was so sweet 
 Yes he does. He thinks it’s sweet.
Thanks.  |
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 02:35pm What's in a name?:Thank you, my dear. Luff choo too!  You're welcome my little cookie muffin. <33 |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 15th, 2006 at 03:48pm That was...awesome!  Bet you weren't expecting me to say that. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 16th, 2006 at 02:07am Know what? I kinda did.  Thank you. |
B.J Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2006 at 06:44am that imagery is just amazing!
Awwww lucky girl,it's a lovely poem |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 16th, 2006 at 07:45am international_idiot:Awwwwwww. *hates you for having someone to watch over*
=] |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 16th, 2006 at 12:47pm Thanks you two!
I guess I’m kinda lucky. My boyfriend is the sweetest ever ^.^ |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 17th, 2006 at 11:32am international_idiot:A few spelling errors
*gasp* Oh, no! Dammit! Where? *panics* |