Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek
![Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225 | May 15th, 2006 at 02:58pm (i dont even know wether i posted this right but whatever)
Each smile, each look,
That says more than you think.
Photos she took,
And the pages smeared with ink,
From the tears she’s cried
When she sees’s him with her.
For the times she’s sighed,
He’s her unseen cancer.
Mental bruises,
From his twisted mind games.
Witch she loses,
Her worlds now up in flames.
Dark make up bleeds,
Her prospects looking grim,
He’s what she needs,
As she will always love him. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 15th, 2006 at 02:59pm That's pretty cool. |
DAMONE_doll_parts Geek
 Age: 103 Gender: Female Posts: 266 | May 15th, 2006 at 03:08pm its good |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 03:31pm It could flow a little better but I like it.
Oh, and btw, I think you mean ‘which’ and not ‘witch’. |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek
![Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225 | May 15th, 2006 at 03:44pm thanks for that! i did mean which, damn spell checker  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| May 15th, 2006 at 04:01pm Thought so ^^ Hey, no problem. |