We May Be Superficial But We Do Care...For A Second Anyway

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Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 15th, 2006 at 03:42pm
Yeah, I know. Long title.
This one's a little...shaky. Writer's block.


Tomorrow's future rebels. Today's fashionable lies.
Scrawling rebellious anecdotes across the spine of their
high school diaries just so they can carry them like a conscience.
A social fad. A personal disfunction for the sake of acceptance.
When rebellion was always about standing alone, that solitary
fist raised beneath a shooting star, auroras of possibilities.


They whine for revolution in premature voices. Tin with inexperience.
Scratching like manicures down blackboards, high heels on gritted pavements.
And they scream for anarchy. They don't know what it means but it sounds so cool
from the lips of an ink-spotted rock star on the candy-glazed television.
They don't know what their condemning for the future. All they know
is that protesting produces that adrenaline high similar to the drugs they abandoned
when the seventies flash-back fevour died out. Next to their flairs. Their attitudes.
So easily adoptable. So much easier to discard in their overnight fashions.

An ungoverned government. Petrol bomb defiance. Toxic skylines.
They'll inflict whatever they can on the future for the sake of their trends.
The grit on the streets are their new mascara highs. Beautifully tainted.
Each repercussion a memory of mohawks, fatigues and the embarrassment of caring.
And only Fate can help the future at the hands of our superficial anarchists.
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Mibba
May 15th, 2006 at 03:51pm
That. Was. AMAZING.

Shush up, you can't be having writer's block. Cool
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 15th, 2006 at 03:59pm
Very Happy
Thank you.
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
May 15th, 2006 at 04:06pm
That’s real cool even if it is a little shaky, as you call it. Wink
snowcherry
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May 15th, 2006 at 04:11pm
Whoohooo!

*jumps*

*smushes it*
War That's In My Mind
Jackass
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May 15th, 2006 at 04:13pm
If that's with writers block you should have it more often
Inari
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Inari
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May 15th, 2006 at 04:30pm
Thank you, guys!!!!

Kiss
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
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May 15th, 2006 at 05:05pm
I know I envy you so much, writers block? pfft
Pffft
It Had to Be You.
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May 15th, 2006 at 07:33pm
Jesus Christ! You know what I'm going to say...

No words will ever describe how much I love your poetry.

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Peter Petrelli
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May 16th, 2006 at 06:35am
I think by 'writers' block', she must mean, amazing burst of creativity Very Happy

I'm struggling to pick favourite lines. But I adored;

'They don't know what it means but it sounds so cool
from the lips of an ink-spotted rock star on the candy-glazed television'


and;

'toxic skylines'.
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Mibba Blog
May 16th, 2006 at 06:48am
wow. That is amazing! I love it! *thumbs up*
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 16th, 2006 at 07:24am
[Flawless Error]:
That. Was. AMAZING.

Shush up, you can't be having writer's block. Cool
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 16th, 2006 at 07:54am
Shocked

Embarassed

Thank you guys.
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