Guran
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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 | May 15th, 2006 at 03:49pm Life on the road is lonley,
and if you just only,
give me a chance to explain,
and help you understand my pain,
the one I've held in all these years,
the reason for my silent tears,
and center of my fear.
I'm afraid to be alone,
I'm afraid to die on my own
i'm not sure of what to do,
to tell the truth I'm lost without you,
all this time I have been thinking,
all these years with none stop drinking
oh so slowly I've been fading,
look at the mess you have been creating
They say I sunk in to deep,
they don't care if you're a creep,
somehow you always pull me in,
loving you must be a deadly sin,
those three words you're gonna say,
I know them because the sky has just turned grey,
baby loving you makes me this way,
and just to let you know,
I'm not okay,
I'm sorry is all I have to say,
I just stopped by to tell you I'm leaving today
what do ya think? |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
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| May 15th, 2006 at 03:51pm It was okay. The rhyming was a bit weird and it didn't flow in some parts. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 15th, 2006 at 03:58pm Love it. |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:49pm |
Guran
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 75
| May 16th, 2006 at 07:27am yay thanks guys |
