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B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 15th, 2006 at 04:42pm Friendship
Keeping Secrets
Telling Lies
Thought you were friends
It was just a disguise
Pulling her down
Until she cries
You thought it was fun
Until her demise
Chorus
Taking control
It's over
That girl's strange
Yeah you showed her
Taking her words
Stomping them to dust
Such a fragile thing
Filled with so much trust
Betraying her
As she was filled with hope
Walk all over her
Sell her out like dope
Chorus
Taking control
It's over
That girl's strange
Yeah you showed her
Talk about me
lie about me
laugh at me say
goodbye to me
I have a tune for it, kind of
please say what you think |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 15th, 2006 at 04:43pm I like that.  |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 15th, 2006 at 05:00pm thanks |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 15th, 2006 at 07:48pm It's awesome!  |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2006 at 03:44am yay! People Like it, I thought it was pretty crap... but I'm strarting to become fond of it |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
 | May 16th, 2006 at 04:01am laugh at me say
That doesnt make sense.... |
MistressDoom
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 108 | May 16th, 2006 at 04:02am Thumbs up! I know what it's like t write lyrics and hate them but honestly, I would use that if I was you it's REALLY good. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2006 at 04:03am it continues to the next line
because when you sing it it sounds better that way |
Bittersweet World
Banned
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 28301
| May 16th, 2006 at 04:07am I wonder who its about though.  |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2006 at 04:08am I wrote that song ages ago... 
I just finished editing it though recently |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | May 16th, 2006 at 04:08am Cass[e]:I wonder who its about though.
and no need to insult my every post now,
if you dont like it get out
if you do, leave your comment and get out |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | May 16th, 2006 at 07:55am You know what I think  |
Brendon Urie..
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2394
| July 12th, 2006 at 05:39pm That girl's strange
Yeah you showed her
...
Walk all over her
Sell her out like dope
I don't know why, but those lines stuck to me. Hard.
I like the title. Because you obviously expect something with a title like this to be sunshine and flowers ... and most people would say the title is the opposite of what it's supposed to be, but for me it's like it's true anyway. Don't know why.
This one is probably my favorite of the four you've showed me.
You're really fucking good. You've got talent. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| July 12th, 2006 at 05:40pm I didn't really like it, I think you forced the rhyme in a lot of places. |
B.J
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: Male
Posts: 8105 | July 12th, 2006 at 05:43pm Ella:I didn't really like it, I think you forced the rhyme in a lot of places.
thanks for your opinion
I wrote it after so much frustration and hurt a year ago
It's probably crap in places but...
its emotions at their peak |
