Fuck A Dog.
Jackass
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Gender: -
Posts: 1065 | May 15th, 2006 at 11:24pm You think you're perfect,
You know you do.
But it's people like you,
That I see through.
Boys fighting over you,
The arguement just sticks like glue.
It never goes away.
'Cause one of them gets you,
And the other one's through.
Perfect grades,
Your looks never fade.
The only thing you've made,
Is the fire that burns between him and I.
Why do you want him?
I wonder sometimes.
But all I feel is jealousy,
And a bit of anger.
Put them together,
That makes rage.
So I sit in my room,
And think about you.
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause you like him,
And he likes you.
The only thing left to say is,
"I'm through." |
Woodrow Derenberger
Moderator
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 63354 | May 16th, 2006 at 12:02am SuperShmexy[Joe]:You think you're perfect,
You know you do.
But it's people like you,
That I see through.
Boys fighting over you,
The arguement just sticks like glue.
It never goes away.
'Cause one of them gets you,
And the other one's through.
Perfect grades,
Your looks never fade.
The only thing you've made,
Is the fire that burns between him and I.
Why do you want him?
I wonder sometimes.
But all I feel is jealousy,
And a bit of anger.
Put them together,
That makes rage.
So I sit in my room,
And think about you.
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause you like him,
And he likes you.
The only thing left to say is,
"I'm through."
that was good Joe... still thinking about the ex-girlfriend |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | May 16th, 2006 at 12:41am It seemed kind of forced but...
I liked it  |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
Geek
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Posts: 225 | May 16th, 2006 at 01:31pm i really liked it! |
Fuck A Dog.
Jackass
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 1065 | May 17th, 2006 at 09:57am thanx guys. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | May 17th, 2006 at 10:02am I like it, but the rime was bit forced. |
Spirit Of '77
Falling In Love With The Board
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Posts: 5024 | May 17th, 2006 at 03:41pm the rhyming in the first stanza is really bad. |
