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miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 16th, 2006 at 01:40pm Okay, this is a random poetry I wrote when I was was bored in Music lesson.
Dreaming
Low whispers in my head.
Can hear them but I don't understand
what they mean and I don't care.
I could be out there
where the sun is shining
and the wind is dancing
in the leaves of the green trees.
Where the birds are sining their little songs.
But I'm not there.
This room's where I am.
Full of people but although it's empty.
I feel isolated, teared apart from everything.
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop.
And I'm looking out of the window,
watching the world that seems
so wonderful, so magical.
And while the whispers are trying
to gain my attention,
I'm dreaming, dreaming of being out there. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | May 16th, 2006 at 02:07pm Beautiful. |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 16th, 2006 at 02:25pm Thank you.  |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | May 16th, 2006 at 02:55pm I like it a lot  |
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593 | May 16th, 2006 at 02:58pm It's amazing. <33 |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | May 16th, 2006 at 03:01pm Awww, that's beautiful. |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 17th, 2006 at 06:58am You're too kind  Thank you!  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| May 17th, 2006 at 03:18pm Whisper, whisper, it won't stop. - LOVE that line.
The rest is awesome too.  |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 19th, 2006 at 09:13am Thank you.  |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 19th, 2006 at 09:19am That's good. |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 19th, 2006 at 09:25am ZOMG Ella said it was good!  |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| May 19th, 2006 at 09:39am The Lollipop Master x):ZOMG Ella said it was good! 
WTF LOL. |
blah blah blah Idiot
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 942 | May 19th, 2006 at 10:00am The Lollipop Master x):Okay, this is a random poetry I wrote when I was was bored in Music lesson.
Dreaming
Low whispers in my head.
Can hear them but I don't understand
what they mean and I don't care.
I could be out there
where the sun is shining
and the wind is dancing
in the leaves of the green trees.
Where the birds are sining their little songs.
But I'm not there.
This room's where I am.
Full of people but although it's empty.
I feel isolated, teared apart from everything.
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop.
And I'm looking out of the window,
watching the world that seems
so wonderful, so magical.
And while the whispers are trying
to gain my attention,
I'm dreaming, dreaming of being out there.
its beautiful  |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 20th, 2006 at 02:45am Ella:The Lollipop Master x):ZOMG Ella said it was good! 
WTF LOL.
Because your poems are so good, I jsut sit there like this  when I read them and now you said mine is good.  |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 20th, 2006 at 02:46am [quote="Redundant Girl
its beautiful  [/quote]
Thank you.  |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 20th, 2006 at 02:47am Redundant Girl:
its beautiful 
Thank you.  |
xXx depressed_emo xXx Geek
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 186 | May 20th, 2006 at 05:28am luv it |
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek
![Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225 | May 20th, 2006 at 12:27pm amazing! |
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | May 20th, 2006 at 12:29pm [Flawless Error]:Whisper, whisper, it won't stop. - LOVE that line.
The rest is awesome too. 
*agrees*
The last line was cool too. |
miau King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 4469 | May 21st, 2006 at 07:58am Thank you!  |