Dreaming

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miau
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miau
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May 16th, 2006 at 01:40pm
Okay, this is a random poetry I wrote when I was was bored in Music lesson. Cool

Dreaming

Low whispers in my head.
Can hear them but I don't understand
what they mean and I don't care.
I could be out there
where the sun is shining
and the wind is dancing
in the leaves of the green trees.
Where the birds are sining their little songs.
But I'm not there.
This room's where I am.
Full of people but although it's empty.
I feel isolated, teared apart from everything.
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop.
And I'm looking out of the window,
watching the world that seems
so wonderful, so magical.
And while the whispers are trying
to gain my attention,
I'm dreaming, dreaming of being out there.
Inari
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May 16th, 2006 at 02:07pm
Beautiful.
miau
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May 16th, 2006 at 02:25pm
Thank you. Very Happy
rollerpig
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May 16th, 2006 at 02:55pm
I like it a lot Very Happy
It Had to Be You.
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May 16th, 2006 at 02:58pm
It's amazing. <33
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May 16th, 2006 at 03:01pm
Awww, that's beautiful.
miau
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May 17th, 2006 at 06:58am
You're too kind Cool Thank you! Very Happy
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Mibba
May 17th, 2006 at 03:18pm
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop. - LOVE that line.

The rest is awesome too. Wink
miau
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May 19th, 2006 at 09:13am
Thank you. Very Happy
newagecarny
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Mibba
May 19th, 2006 at 09:19am
That's good.
miau
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May 19th, 2006 at 09:25am
ZOMG Ella said it was good! GZA Laughing
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Mibba
May 19th, 2006 at 09:39am
The Lollipop Master x):
ZOMG Ella said it was good! GZA Laughing

WTF LOL.
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May 19th, 2006 at 10:00am
The Lollipop Master x):
Okay, this is a random poetry I wrote when I was was bored in Music lesson. Cool

Dreaming

Low whispers in my head.
Can hear them but I don't understand
what they mean and I don't care.
I could be out there
where the sun is shining
and the wind is dancing
in the leaves of the green trees.
Where the birds are sining their little songs.
But I'm not there.
This room's where I am.
Full of people but although it's empty.
I feel isolated, teared apart from everything.
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop.
And I'm looking out of the window,
watching the world that seems
so wonderful, so magical.
And while the whispers are trying
to gain my attention,
I'm dreaming, dreaming of being out there.



its beautiful Very Happy
miau
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miau
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May 20th, 2006 at 02:45am
Ella:
The Lollipop Master x):
ZOMG Ella said it was good! GZA Laughing

WTF LOL.


Because your poems are so good, I jsut sit there like this Shocked when I read them and now you said mine is good. Laughing
miau
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miau
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May 20th, 2006 at 02:46am
[quote="Redundant Girl


its beautiful Very Happy[/quote]


Thank you. Very Happy
miau
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May 20th, 2006 at 02:47am
Redundant Girl:



its beautiful Very Happy



Thank you. Very Happy
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May 20th, 2006 at 05:28am
luv it
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay]
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May 20th, 2006 at 12:27pm
amazing!
11th Street Kid
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May 20th, 2006 at 12:29pm
[Flawless Error]:
Whisper, whisper, it won't stop. - LOVE that line.

The rest is awesome too. Wink


*agrees*

The last line was cool too.
miau
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May 21st, 2006 at 07:58am
Thank you! Very Happy
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