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rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | May 16th, 2006 at 07:24pm It doesn’t matter if it’s halfway across the world
Everything is my fault tell all the boys and girls
Watch out for me
Cause according to them
The world won’t be safe till I end
I don’t know what I did to get this reputation
But now that I have it, god damn I hate it
Cause now just look at me and you got yourself a villian
I’m walkin down the street hide all the women and children
Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you |
imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 17th, 2006 at 05:11am I don't like it. |
x:MaDi:x
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Posts: 426 | May 17th, 2006 at 06:22am its ok. i dont really like unhappy poems/songs though so i guess i cant really judge it... |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | May 17th, 2006 at 08:22am imtwasidwelya:I don't like it.
yeah, neither do i, but could you give me some criticism, so i can fix it? |
||:Minority Madness:||
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 83 | May 18th, 2006 at 10:01pm i'm not quite sure what i think about it, but i'll probably start to like it. |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | May 19th, 2006 at 11:05am ||:Minority Madness |:i'm not quite sure what i think about it, but i'll probably start to like it.
possibly...continue to look at it. lol. |
Magazine Sickness.
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Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 443
  | May 19th, 2006 at 11:10am I like the first paragraph the best.
It had real emotion in it.
You can feel it when you read it.
But you kinda lost it after that.
Just my opinion.
Kat xx |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3593 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:12pm Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you
I liked this stanza. Good job.  |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:38pm It Had to Be You.:Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you
I liked this stanza. Good job.
thank you so much! |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3593 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:40pm rage;love;clark:It Had to Be You.:Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you
I liked this stanza. Good job.
thank you so much! You're welcome!  |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | May 19th, 2006 at 01:45pm It Had to Be You.:rage;love;clark:It Had to Be You.:Freedom of expression
Why are you testing
My anger against you has only grown
I’ll never tell you
Freedom of my anger
You are all in danger
Just in time to hear I let you know
I’ll never tell you
I liked this stanza. Good job.
thank you so much! You're welcome!
it's weird cause i still have to write the second verse in the form of the first stanza |
