neil patrick harris.
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 | May 16th, 2006 at 09:57pm Honestly - I don't get the point of this poem...what do you guys think it's about?
Forget the Truth; Let’s Live a Lie
The dragon comes out of its cave at the crack of dawn
And yawns in the breezy daybreak radiance.
Before he notices the day is almost already gone.
The knight protects himself in his own defense.
Let the unicorns fight with their fake horns.
Allow the pigs fly around high into the daytime sky.
Let Big Foot become naked as the day he was born.
Permit the Bearded Woman to really be a guy.
Forget the reality it only injures us; it murder us.
Let’s live a lie, baby. And let’s exist eternally.
Allow the fact pass away and become distressed.
The truth will get to you soon and way too early.
Forget the defiance and remember the glory
Of the days when you had a choice to be you.
Remember the days of the sad, lengthy story.
Memorize the lie and overlook what is true. |
imtwasidwelya
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Posts: 357 | May 17th, 2006 at 04:58am Don't hold onto the lie because it catches up to you. |
vonny
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 | May 17th, 2006 at 05:17am I kinda like it. It's saying that to live in your own little world where you can believe in whatever you want to believe in and not let people say it's not real. |
Inari
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Posts: 2538 | May 17th, 2006 at 07:39am That's awesomeness.
I love it. |
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| May 17th, 2006 at 03:11pm The first and fourth stanzas own.  The other two had good ideas, but in my mind they didn't seem the most poetic.  |
rollerpig
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Posts: 62283 | May 17th, 2006 at 03:15pm I really like the idea of it .. |
neil patrick harris.
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Age: 33
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| May 17th, 2006 at 04:54pm Thanks.
This is jut one of those poems I rushed through. I could probably do better.
The idea was good, yes. But I know the poem isn't that great. |
love.
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Posts: 2844 | May 19th, 2006 at 09:34pm i like it |
clark
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Posts: 79047 | May 19th, 2006 at 09:37pm It's good  |
Misanthropist
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Posts: 23279 | May 19th, 2006 at 10:54pm It seemed kind of like...a follow your own path type thing. It was good, a little more work on it couldn't hurt though. |
Whitney.
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Gender: Female
Posts: 507 | May 19th, 2006 at 10:59pm i like it 
ur a good poet |
