MY POEm of LOve and Distress ----- tell me wat you think

Author	Message
blah blah blah Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 942	May 17th, 2006 at 09:34am Sittin alone waiting for you waiting for you to come and save me save me from this save me from them save me from everything I've ever feared save from this life I've never asked for come and hold me till the night is over wipe my tears I call normal hold me and tell me you love me please please save me!!! dedicated to my bf Derek! i wuv you! (Ive done better)
blah blah blah Idiot Age: - Gender: - Posts: 942	May 17th, 2006 at 09:41am ok ok ok ive come to terms its crap, I have better stuff but its at home!!
Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	May 17th, 2006 at 06:45pm Uh...okay o_o; Lacked feeling. You could use some better words as well.
Clandi-Shan Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 51	May 17th, 2006 at 06:58pm It's ok but u should be more descriptive.It lacks emotion.U have to make people feel what your feeling.Write what u feel.
Sara. This Board Is My Home Age: - Gender: - Posts: 31155	May 17th, 2006 at 07:06pm Annie Victim: Uh...okay o_o; Lacked feeling. You could use some better words as well. That And Maybe Some Other, Different Words...
punkrockbitch Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3	May 17th, 2006 at 07:12pm i think its great! but it would make a better song than poem.

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