Jordyn
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3976 | May 17th, 2006 at 06:04pm When Time Vanishes
Written for my father, because he's done so much for me, and I'd be an idiot not to reflect on it before he's gone.
Looking back to the beginning,
All I ever saw was a blur,
A blur of what would become trust and love
These visions are still here
A flood of despair ran through my mind
When I realized there wasn't enough time
You'd be long gone before I knew what hit us
Leaving me falling to pieces in the end.
But you're still here for a while longer
I don't know how I'll move on without you
I'll be dead, emotionless, and frozen in memories
Wishing you back with regrets of the past.
You're not going to haunt me,
I'll appreciate your presence when you're gone
I'll live like you'd have wanted me to all my life
And I'll never betray your trust again
Not even if you're gone. |
Zoie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 6370 | May 18th, 2006 at 12:32am That was amazing, it just about made me cry. Awsome job. |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 18th, 2006 at 12:32am A flood of despair ran through my mind
When I realized there wasn't enough time
You'd be long gone before I knew what hit us
Leaving me falling to pieces in the end.
Hunny, it's wonderful! <3 |
Jordyn
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 3976 | May 18th, 2006 at 12:39am high_on_juicy_fruit:That was amazing, it just about made me cry. Awsome job. Really? Wow. Thank you so much! 
Panagiotakos.<3:A flood of despair ran through my mind
When I realized there wasn't enough time
You'd be long gone before I knew what hit us
Leaving me falling to pieces in the end.
Hunny, it's wonderful! <3 Thanks, Lisa! :] |
It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: -
Posts: 3593 | May 18th, 2006 at 12:44am Jordyn:high_on_juicy_fruit:That was amazing, it just about made me cry. Awsome job. Really? Wow. Thank you so much!
Panagiotakos.<3:A flood of despair ran through my mind
When I realized there wasn't enough time
You'd be long gone before I knew what hit us
Leaving me falling to pieces in the end.
Hunny, it's wonderful! <3 Thanks, Lisa! :] You're welcome sweet pea! <3 |
Band Geek
Geek
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Posts: 134 | May 18th, 2006 at 03:49am Beautiful |
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
 | May 18th, 2006 at 04:58am That's a splendid poem, really. |
MistressDoom
Geek
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Posts: 108 | May 18th, 2006 at 05:06am That's what i'm talking about!!!!
I spent today reading BAD poetry, it's wonderful to hear work with meaning it seriously rocks!
i too, teared up.
Keep up the awesome stuff!!!! |
Misanthropist
Post Whore
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 23279 | May 18th, 2006 at 06:48am I like it. |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2844 | May 18th, 2006 at 10:11pm wow.that was great. |
