Too Much Eyeliner Jackass
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297
| May 17th, 2006 at 10:27pm Have you ever been left in the cold?
In the dark?
Alone?
Say no for its the truth.
Don't lie to me
I don't want your sympathy
I want your trust
Please don't lie to me
I want the real you
I don't need your little lies
Cause all you've ever done
Was give me sympathy
Only when I was blue
You really paid attention to me
Why have you stopped right now?
I don't want your sympathy
I don't need your fake smiles
Or little lies
I don't need you
I don't want you
I hate you
Something I wrote in a few minutes.. O_O |
Misanthropist Post Whore
 Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 23279 | May 17th, 2006 at 11:51pm It was okay. A little too much use of the word 'I' for my taste but the whole concept was good. |
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297
| May 18th, 2006 at 12:00am Vita-Koolaid:It was okay. A little too much use of the word 'I' for my taste but the whole concept was good. I know.
But hey, I wrote it in a few minutes. |