Suicidal Kisses

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It Had to Be You.
King For A Couple Of Days
It Had to Be You.
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May 19th, 2006 at 01:07pm
Left slumped down the door, body racked with sobs
Wishing you'd never gone, and left me with suicidal kisses
Solemnly alone, no-one to guide me through this hard time.

Godfrey, you never sieze to amaze me. Ily. <3

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Mibba
May 19th, 2006 at 02:47pm
I liked the last two stanzas. The flow was off, but that's okay. Cool
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