Driving over Leaves in the Rain

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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 22nd, 2006 at 07:50pm Gah. The whole title didn't fit in the subject. So anyway, new structure-type-thing going on here. Not that different, but whatever. Hit the Brakes. It's Too Dangerous Driving over Leaves in the Rain You’ve almost got me Driving over leaves in the rain. Don’t risk it, can’t risk it. That stoplight seems To be coming closer fast. Now we hit the brakes. Why don’t you stop? Before You would draw a picture Of the end of the world As long as it fit your mood. Explosions and fire, Forget the angels, dear. This sketch is just for you. A portrait of the blinding light that Echoes from the shattering glass. Careful it doesn’t get in your eyes. It’s a real shame you just can’t Dodge your way out from The forefront of this solecism. Why didn’t you move? Now You’ve got me way past Driving over leaves in the rain. I’ve risked it, did risk it. That stoplight didn’t seem To be doing any stopping. I never hit the brakes. Sorry.
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 22nd, 2006 at 08:29pm A portrait of the blinding light that Echoes from the shattering glass. Careful it doesn’t get in your eyes. It’s a real shame you just can’t Dodge your way out from The forefront of this solecism. Wonderful hun!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 22nd, 2006 at 08:51pm Thank you. =]
Dehren McGhengland Rotting On Here Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 49206	May 22nd, 2006 at 09:37pm That was good.
Misanthropist Post Whore Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 23279	May 22nd, 2006 at 11:47pm A portrait of the blinding light that Echoes from the shattering glass. Careful it doesn’t get in your eyes. It’s a real shame you just can’t Dodge your way out from The forefront of this solecism. Very good.
razzledgirl Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491	May 23rd, 2006 at 01:31am it was confusing, but i loved the words you used, i still loved it.
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	May 23rd, 2006 at 02:06am i like the concept of "driving over leaves in the rain" as if its like the dangers of life and how you can hurt people [was that how it was supposed to come out like??] i really liked it
Bunny Rabbit [fromxhell] Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 50	May 23rd, 2006 at 02:30am Lovely! =]
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 23rd, 2006 at 05:41am Very, very good. You have this great stile about your writing that i really like.
Kid_Gates Geek Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 289	May 23rd, 2006 at 05:54am thats the best thing i've ever read on here
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 23rd, 2006 at 06:26am I can't choose a favourite part. It just rocks. Amazingly. Awwwww. Your talent makes me jealous.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	May 23rd, 2006 at 06:28am Stunning.
clark GSBitch Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 79047	May 23rd, 2006 at 06:34am Amazing.
B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105	May 23rd, 2006 at 06:46am I just love it truly stunning
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 23rd, 2006 at 09:33am That's got to be my favourite one of your poems. I adore that so much! You would draw a picture Of the end of the world As long as it fit your mood. Explosions and fire, Forget the angels, dear. This sketch is just for you. I'm totally in love with this part.
Buddy Christ Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 5821	May 23rd, 2006 at 09:49am That was great.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	May 23rd, 2006 at 09:52am Yeah ^^ I love it.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 23rd, 2006 at 02:45pm Holy crap, you guys. I didn't expect this to go over that well! Thank you soooo much! And to Ruler of Sporks: Yes, you completely got the concept of the poem! Makes me happy to know that people actually get what I'm writing about. Again, thank you all immensely.

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