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razzledgirl Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491	May 24th, 2006 at 01:56pm its really good, and sad, i don't know about the title... un-needed mishaps? no
razzledgirl Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491	May 24th, 2006 at 02:05pm Teh Coolest Mohican....: what do you mean about the un-needed mishaps? i was thinking about a title.....you know thinking to myself and writing it down at the same time.... it twas good
razzledgirl Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491	May 24th, 2006 at 02:11pm Teh Coolest Mohican....: OH..HOKAY! xD -caps abuse- lol...your funny
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	May 24th, 2006 at 02:22pm It's good.
razzledgirl Jackass Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 1491	May 24th, 2006 at 02:23pm Teh Coolest Mohican....: Am I? O_O yep! i think so!!, i LURB funny people
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 24th, 2006 at 02:46pm Ella: It's good.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 24th, 2006 at 04:28pm I think it’s quite beautiful. Don’t think the last stanza really fits however. (Yeah it’s very sincere and heartfelt I do get that). Also the flow could be better. Overall it’s good.
Kyna Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 435	May 24th, 2006 at 04:36pm You did great.
votefordisco Rotting On Here Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 45710	May 25th, 2006 at 01:16pm Aww that was really sweet : )
~tre's_lost_nut~ King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2504	May 25th, 2006 at 01:19pm i nearly cried O.o

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