I really don't like this...

Be brutally honest....no idea where the inspiration came from, feel free to suggest a name to if you want....

I’m falling,
Falling through the clear night air.
But I do not panic,
I know you will be there.
There to catch me,
Not a second too late.
You always are,
In your hands is my fate.
But the air keeps rushing,
Rushing past.
I become a little scared,
But the fright does not last.
For I trust you,
You would never let me die.
We love each other,
The odds we will defy.
Then at the last second,
There you are.
Your eyes wide with fright,
Your voice rings out from afar.
‘I promised.’ You call,
Voice loud and clear.
‘I know.’ I reply,
I still do not fear.
The ground rushes to meet me,
I prepare for the pain.
But it doesn’t come,
You have saved me again.

OK don't take offence to this because it is a compliment. Its kind of a dumbed down version of Wish You Were Here by Pink Floyd, or even Question! by SOAD.

Its pretty good as a poem, though. If you were to find this in a Year 10 poem book I'm sure they'd study it a lot.

I think it should be called: Fraying Rope At Midnight

Or something... I dunno...

I like that name, i haven't heard either of those songs so....thankyou anyway much appreciated.

Mistah Cheney.:

Thanks

I think it’s good. Very genuine if not all that poetic.
I can relate very well and that’s probably contributing to why I like it.

I like it. *thumbs up*

It was pretty good. It flowed well and most of the rhyming didn't come across as forced. Good job.