a child in darkness (part one)

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Kyna
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Kyna
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May 25th, 2006 at 08:46pm
She's a child calling out for love from the darkness
because no one else would give that to her
and the darkness just watches
keeping her safe, tasting her fear
under each breath,
while she reaches out to him
with her hands pleading
for him to touch them
but the darkness never does.
It just watches.
freedumb
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freedumb
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May 25th, 2006 at 08:47pm
I made a song called darkness but it wasn't as good as that..
Kyna
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Kyna
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May 26th, 2006 at 05:22am
Thank you.
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
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May 26th, 2006 at 08:05am
I like that.
That's cool.
What's in a name?
King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba
May 26th, 2006 at 03:05pm
I like it. You're improving. Smile
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
love.
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May 26th, 2006 at 03:13pm
thats really cool...i like it!
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May 26th, 2006 at 09:31pm
I like it...............r u gonna add any more 2 it?
Kyna
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Kyna
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May 26th, 2006 at 09:40pm
punk_rock_fan_1988:
I like it...............r u gonna add any more 2 it?


I might.
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