Newspaper Pattern Analysis

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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 27th, 2006 at 09:53pm Written during a panic attack, so if it seems disjointed, that was the point. It's kind of weird. =/ It was inspired by this strange true story I read mixed with my panic. That combination makes for some odd reading. XD Newspaper Pattern Analysis The echoes beat with the throb Of the breath that won’t leave Your tightened throat. We all arrive at different times. The air is just a bit late. Do we really need the technique Of bloodstain pattern analysis To tell ourselves what went wrong? Just listen to the reverberations; Hope the echoes don’t fade away. “Where are you?” Here in Hallucinations, are you Sure they aren’t real? Maybe the images weren’t, But it did drop twenty degrees. “I can’t deal with you anymore.” Why don’t you keep your resolution? Walk out on me and I’ll try Closing my eyes, but it turns out Newspaper stories always read the same.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	May 28th, 2006 at 05:49am Hey, I loved that, honestly. That was pretty cool.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 28th, 2006 at 05:56am I really liked that I adore the title. And the disjointed feel was effective... really awesome
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 28th, 2006 at 06:54am I love it actually. The disjointed feel was affective. A lot of times it doesn’t work but you pulled it off! It’s not poetic in the sense of beauty, but still poetic in some wired way. I love how you construct your sentences. It doesn’t flow but I guess it wasn’t meant to. It’s better this way. [/rant] A mighty fine poem, dear soulmate.
Babi Kid Rachy King For A Couple Of Days Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 4512	May 28th, 2006 at 06:55am Ohmy i love it!
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	May 28th, 2006 at 06:57am it's OK
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 28th, 2006 at 08:53am Thank you, my lovelies! Glad to know the disjointed effect worked. ^.^
Jay Tee Had A Life Before GSB Age: 36 Gender: Male Posts: 26777	May 28th, 2006 at 09:17am Wow that was pretty good. I like the single lines scattered through out and the way its disjointed. I'm a huge fan of weird time signatures in songs, so strange rhythms and patterns in poems are excellent. Fantastic stuff.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 28th, 2006 at 09:20am Wow, thanks! I like weird time signatures too.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	May 28th, 2006 at 09:23am ^ as do I
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 28th, 2006 at 09:57am Meski: it's OK OK? How is it OK when she has mastered everything in her poem? I don't think you even read it. -_- And great job hun! I loved the second stanza.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 28th, 2006 at 10:01am Haha, thank you Lisa. You needn't stick up for me; everyone has their own opinions. But thanks anyway. Luff choo.
It Had to Be You. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3593	May 28th, 2006 at 10:06am Luff choo too. Sorry, I get wicked defensive sometimes. XD

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